Never Felt This Pretty

(09/05/2012)

My birthday skin of 80 year old soul It wrinkles here and there but I’m pretty Who would’ve thought I used to be a fool Had chased abstract things, had left me dizzy My first hubby said I was a witty But I kept on searching for compliments Stupidities were wrapped in arguments For my second, I never loved him sweet He did do worst things inside our moments Had enough after, I stood on my feet A perfect skin for 80 year old me Did I say I feel pretty? I did, right? Aged skin, cracked bones, grey hair; a beauty me Blurry sight never fails my inner light Of my self, I had put up selfish fight It did come when I was 60, oh my! I thought before 70 I would've died Never thought of this as a bless before I stopped offer myself to random guy Respect my weak body for a year more
Sits on 8th Place for Cyndi Macmillan Contes 'My Birthday Suit'

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012



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Date: 6/8/2012 6:56:00 PM
Soo enjoyed your pen...today....and its a great write...difference can be so beautiful....
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Date: 6/6/2012 9:14:00 AM
nice write Dinda
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Date: 5/16/2012 9:36:00 AM
congrats on your win! Sounds like she finally learned to respect herself - true story of someone you know, or just a creative idea?
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Date: 5/14/2012 11:01:00 AM
so rightfully expressed, dinda.. congrats with huggs! :)
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Date: 5/13/2012 3:34:00 AM
You should have always felt pretty! Great one for the contest and so happy with your win. Love, Lizzie
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:57:00 PM
Congrats on your win, pretty lady!!
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:55:00 PM
Congrats Dinda!!A wonderful take on the contest theme and a very good example of a Dizain.
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Date: 5/11/2012 2:51:00 PM
lovely thought provoking piece. many congrats on all your wins, my friend
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Date: 5/11/2012 7:29:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/11/2012 5:05:00 AM
Congratulations on your 8o year old birthday suit win Dinda, and I hope you have many more years in it xx
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Date: 5/11/2012 3:05:00 AM
Dinda, huge congrats on your win...80!!!...David
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Date: 5/10/2012 9:40:00 PM
I would never have guessed 80, Dinda!! Pretty is as pretty does!!
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Date: 5/9/2012 10:43:00 AM
I agree with David here - well written Dinda. - oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 5/9/2012 10:25:00 AM
Dinda you look great for an 80 year old..David
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Date: 5/9/2012 10:19:00 AM
Smile ˜ Ahhh, Sooo Very Precious Tis This Sweeet Tender Voice In Verse, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Dinda * Makes Me Think Of Abrams Wife, Beautiful Sarai; Whom Retained Her Beauty Well Into Her Years ˜ Lovely, My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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