Never Felt This Pretty

(09/05/2012)

My birthday skin of 80 year old soul It wrinkles here and there but I’m pretty Who would’ve thought I used to be a fool Had chased abstract things, had left me dizzy My first hubby said I was a witty But I kept on searching for compliments Stupidities were wrapped in arguments For my second, I never loved him sweet He did do worst things inside our moments Had enough after, I stood on my feet A perfect skin for 80 year old me Did I say I feel pretty? I did, right? Aged skin, cracked bones, grey hair; a beauty me Blurry sight never fails my inner light Of my self, I had put up selfish fight It did come when I was 60, oh my! I thought before 70 I would've died Never thought of this as a bless before I stopped offer myself to random guy Respect my weak body for a year more
Sits on 8th Place for Cyndi Macmillan Contes 'My Birthday Suit'
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June 8, 2012 at 6:56 PM
Soo enjoyed your pen...today....and its a great write...difference can be so beautiful....
Palmer Avatar
June 6, 2012 at 9:14 AM
nice write Dinda
Susan Avatar
May 16, 2012 at 9:36 AM
congrats on your win! Sounds like she finally learned to respect herself - true story of someone you know, or just a creative idea?
Onclaud Avatar
May 14, 2012 at 11:01 AM
so rightfully expressed, dinda.. congrats with huggs! :)
Wesley Avatar
May 13, 2012 at 3:34 AM
You should have always felt pretty! Great one for the contest and so happy with your win. Love, Lizzie
Dietrich Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:57 PM
Congrats on your win, pretty lady!!
Poet Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:55 PM
Congrats Dinda!!A wonderful take on the contest theme and a very good example of a Dizain.
Horne Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 2:51 PM
lovely thought provoking piece. many congrats on all your wins, my friend
Brown Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 7:29 AM
Congratulations on your win in Cyndi's "Your Birthday Suit" contest Dinda. Love, Carol
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May 11, 2012 at 5:05 AM
Congratulations on your 8o year old birthday suit win Dinda, and I hope you have many more years in it xx
Williams Avatar
May 11, 2012 at 3:05 AM
Dinda, huge congrats on your win...80!!!...David
Dietrich Avatar
May 10, 2012 at 9:40 PM
I would never have guessed 80, Dinda!! Pretty is as pretty does!!
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May 9, 2012 at 10:43 AM
I agree with David here - well written Dinda. - oxox love Anne-Lise
Williams Avatar
May 9, 2012 at 10:25 AM
Dinda you look great for an 80 year old..David
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May 9, 2012 at 10:19 AM
Smile ˜ Ahhh, Sooo Very Precious Tis This Sweeet Tender Voice In Verse, My Dear Sweeet Beautiful Dinda * Makes Me Think Of Abrams Wife, Beautiful Sarai; Whom Retained Her Beauty Well Into Her Years ˜ Lovely, My Love, Forever; John!:) ˜
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