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Never Ending Joy

Took me quite some time to work out love a souls recognition of each others bond Holding close warm thoughts sailing into the horizon inside dreams Forever jumping over the moon always floating together in space Dancing with the spirits of light without touch embracing grace a harp flows music plays Sweet wings unfolding magically holding the inside breathless The sweet song of you're voice echoes all over four chambers Singing birds all of them songbirds together music in love One glorious choir enchants magic with lots of colour in a rainbow Yeah the very first kiss it seals the deal with my soul Such innocence takes over really childlike so rare and very beautiful one gem princess cut without fault perfect Wonderful dreams fill up in the ocean rising salted waves unfurling gallops Kissing the lips of happiness holding hands upon golden sands walking beside you Almost weightless floating in your air on a celestial breeze of deep beauty

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Matthew Anish

Date: 10/1/2014 3:31:00 PM

Sparkling images in this fine ode! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/1/2014 3:46:00 PM

ahh matthew so sweet of you truly touching beautiful comment bless you

Vera Duggan

Date: 9/29/2014 7:40:00 PM

Liam all you had to do is ask me about love LoL. after 53 years I should know, getting back to your poem I loved it, so much emotion you have written here, thank you for sharing my friend, take care..........Vera.............

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 9:10:00 PM

aah vera thank you for the sweetest most beautiful comment love can be always beautiful i look at my mum and dad they never leave each others side its a powerful feeling when it takes hold smiling bless you dear friend

Charlotte Puddifoot

Date: 9/29/2014 6:09:00 AM

this is a very lovely, romantic write! I like the internal rhyme you've used; I always like to see that device used within free verse...your romantic soul is much in evidence throughout this poem! :)

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 6:25:00 AM

charlotte thank you for your kindness truly very beautiful comment heartfelt deeply appreciated

Antony Rodrigues

Date: 9/28/2014 10:07:00 PM

This is extremely good! I really loved it. It made me travel in my mind.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/29/2014 1:48:00 AM

ah thank you antony for the amazing beautiful comment bless you

James Marshall Goff

Date: 9/28/2014 10:33:00 AM

Liam...i understand and embrace the emotion penned in this beautiful poem! Never Ending Joy....describes this poem exactly! Jimbo

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/28/2014 11:35:00 AM

jimbo smiling thank you for the kind and very beautiful comment the joy inside i felt writing it just flowed from the heart

Ravi Sathasivam

Date: 9/28/2014 7:07:00 AM

Excellent. Beautiful romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/28/2014 7:25:00 AM

thank you so much ravi truly a wonderful comment thank you so kindly deeply appreciated

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 9/27/2014 10:55:00 PM

this is just brimming with romantic joy. You are a poet dreamer!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 11:15:00 PM

smiling beautiful comment andrea always a pleasure thank you deeply truly appreciated dear friend

Ken Carroll

Date: 9/27/2014 7:39:00 PM

Good stuff old pal!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 11:12:00 PM

thank you ken old pal always great to see you beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/27/2014 6:08:00 PM

The romantic imagery expressed through words is divine in this lovely poem. Blessings, Connie

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 11:09:00 PM

thank you ever so much connie truly very beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 9/27/2014 8:11:00 AM

Last line consider "radiating beauty" oozing somehow feels icky which is contrary to the rest of this beautiful write.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 10/7/2014 11:08:00 AM

richard i will take a look at that, thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated

Demetrios Trifiatis

Date: 9/27/2014 4:39:00 AM

You my friend, Liam, are the Michelangelo of love writing! A seven!

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 6:44:00 AM

ah demetrios thank you for such kind and wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you pal touched deeply

S.Jagathsimhan Nair

Date: 9/26/2014 8:49:00 PM

Hi Liam, Thanks for stopping by. This one is truly a lovely write, with love permeating and pouring out of every word of it. Really enjoyed it.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 2:11:00 AM

jagathi touching heartfelt beautiful comment so so true thank you from the bottom of my heart bless you

Casarah Nance

Date: 9/26/2014 8:23:00 PM

Beautiful, almost weightless floating in your air .... i love that, well said sweetheart.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/27/2014 2:09:00 AM

thank you deeply casarah truly touching beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you

Robert Lindley

Date: 9/26/2014 6:59:00 PM

When the flames burn like that, keep the heart resting on that mountain top my friend. Its safe up there and the breeze so very soothing too. Congrats on having found such a life partner my friend. Your fine write expressed it all so beautifully. Giving this free verse a solid 7 rating..

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 7:26:00 PM

robert thank you ever so kindly truly wonderful comment warmed the insides god bless dear friend

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 7:01:00 PM

wonderful comment debbie for the very beautiful comment thank you kindly appreciated deeply

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/26/2014 6:57:00 PM

Very nice smooth use of personification. Light & Love

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 11/29/2014 1:39:00 AM

debbie dear friend thank you very kindly beautiful comment bless you

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 9/26/2014 5:57:00 PM

How lovely this piece is.. I like these lines... "Wonderful dreams fill up in the ocean rising salted waves" Finely expressed poetry. : ) Always, Laura

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 6:02:00 PM

laura thank you deeply for such a very beautiful comment deeply appreciated

Paul Callus

Date: 9/26/2014 2:56:00 PM

Hi Liam...I see that love's energy is still sparkling steadily for you! Very enjoyable and romantic write. Keep the flame alight and the song full of joy! // paul

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 3:05:00 PM

sure love can make great music smiling thank you paul for your kindness wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/26/2014 12:41:00 PM

such a jubilant work worthy of an applause, liam.. huggs

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:12:00 PM

ah nette so very kind of you dear friend deeply appreciated your wonderful comment

Jan Allison

Date: 9/26/2014 11:44:00 AM

wonderful romantic write Liam i wish i could write as romantically as this but I am trying:-) Hugs Jan xxxx

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 1:11:00 PM

thank you jan so deeply appreciated your wonderful comment smiling bless you

Eileen Manassian

Date: 9/26/2014 11:02:00 AM

Awwwwww.....she has a beautiful voice. That must be music to your ears, my dear. Lovely write. I'm glad you are high on love.

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 12:56:00 PM

smiling always singing in the mind eileen wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated

Pandita Sietesantos

Date: 9/26/2014 10:57:00 AM

Liam, this is so lovely! What a beautiful, romantic write. I love it, my friend! Pandita

Liam Mcdaid
Date: 9/26/2014 12:54:00 PM

thank you pandita truly beautiful comment bless you