Never Ending Joy

Took me quite some time to work out love 
a souls recognition of each others bond 
Holding close warm thoughts 
sailing into the horizon inside dreams 
Forever jumping over the moon 
always floating together in space 

Dancing with the spirits of light 
without touch embracing grace 
a harp flows music plays 
Sweet wings unfolding magically 
holding the inside breathless 
The sweet song of you're voice 
echoes all over four chambers 

Singing birds all of them 
songbirds together music in love 
One glorious choir enchants magic 
with lots of colour in a rainbow 
Yeah the very first kiss 
it seals the deal with my soul 

Such innocence takes over 
really childlike 
so rare and very beautiful 
one gem princess cut 
without fault perfect 

Wonderful dreams fill up in the ocean 
rising salted waves 
unfurling gallops 
Kissing the lips of happiness 
holding hands upon golden sands 
walking beside you 
Almost weightless 
floating in your air 
on a celestial breeze of deep beauty
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Anish Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 3:31 PM
Sparkling images in this fine ode! Peace & Blessings Matthew Anish
Mcdaid Avatar
October 1, 2014 at 3:46 PM
ahh matthew so sweet of you truly touching beautiful comment bless you
Duggan Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 7:40 PM
Liam all you had to do is ask me about love LoL. after 53 years I should know, getting back to your poem I loved it, so much emotion you have written here, thank you for sharing my friend, take care..........Vera.............
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 9:10 PM
aah vera thank you for the sweetest most beautiful comment love can be always beautiful i look at my mum and dad they never leave each others side its a powerful feeling when it takes hold smiling bless you dear friend
Puddifoot Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 6:09 AM
this is a very lovely, romantic write! I like the internal rhyme you've used; I always like to see that device used within free verse...your romantic soul is much in evidence throughout this poem! :)
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 6:25 AM
charlotte thank you for your kindness truly very beautiful comment heartfelt deeply appreciated
Rodrigues Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 10:07 PM
This is extremely good! I really loved it. It made me travel in my mind.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 29, 2014 at 1:48 AM
ah thank you antony for the amazing beautiful comment bless you
Goff Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 10:33 AM
Liam...i understand and embrace the emotion penned in this beautiful poem! Never Ending Joy....describes this poem exactly! Jimbo
Mcdaid Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 11:35 AM
jimbo smiling thank you for the kind and very beautiful comment the joy inside i felt writing it just flowed from the heart
Sathasivam Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:07 AM
Excellent. Beautiful romantic write. Enjoyed reading it. Tfs
Mcdaid Avatar
September 28, 2014 at 7:25 AM
thank you so much ravi truly a wonderful comment thank you so kindly deeply appreciated
Dietrich Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 10:55 PM
this is just brimming with romantic joy. You are a poet dreamer!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:15 PM
smiling beautiful comment andrea always a pleasure thank you deeply truly appreciated dear friend
Carroll Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 7:39 PM
Good stuff old pal!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:12 PM
thank you ken old pal always great to see you beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Marcum Wong Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:08 PM
The romantic imagery expressed through words is divine in this lovely poem. Blessings, Connie
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 11:09 PM
thank you ever so much connie truly very beautiful comment bless you deeply appreciated
Lamoureux Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 8:11 AM
Last line consider "radiating beauty" oozing somehow feels icky which is contrary to the rest of this beautiful write.
Mcdaid Avatar
October 7, 2014 at 11:08 AM
richard i will take a look at that, thank you dear friend for the wonderful comment deeply appreciated
Trifiatis Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 4:39 AM
You my friend, Liam, are the Michelangelo of love writing! A seven!
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 6:44 AM
ah demetrios thank you for such kind and wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you pal touched deeply
Nair Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 8:49 PM
Hi Liam, Thanks for stopping by. This one is truly a lovely write, with love permeating and pouring out of every word of it. Really enjoyed it.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 2:11 AM
jagathi touching heartfelt beautiful comment so so true thank you from the bottom of my heart bless you
Nance Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 8:23 PM
Beautiful, almost weightless floating in your air .... i love that, well said sweetheart.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 27, 2014 at 2:09 AM
thank you deeply casarah truly touching beautiful comment heartfelt appreciated bless you
Lindley Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:59 PM
When the flames burn like that, keep the heart resting on that mountain top my friend. Its safe up there and the breeze so very soothing too. Congrats on having found such a life partner my friend. Your fine write expressed it all so beautifully. Giving this free verse a solid 7 rating..
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:26 PM
robert thank you ever so kindly truly wonderful comment warmed the insides god bless dear friend
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 7:01 PM
wonderful comment debbie for the very beautiful comment thank you kindly appreciated deeply
Guzzi Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:57 PM
Very nice smooth use of personification. Light & Love
Mcdaid Avatar
November 29, 2014 at 1:39 AM
debbie dear friend thank you very kindly beautiful comment bless you
Breidenthal Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 5:57 PM
How lovely this piece is.. I like these lines... "Wonderful dreams fill up in the ocean rising salted waves" Finely expressed poetry. : ) Always, Laura
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 6:02 PM
laura thank you deeply for such a very beautiful comment deeply appreciated
Callus Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 2:56 PM
Hi Liam...I see that love's energy is still sparkling steadily for you! Very enjoyable and romantic write. Keep the flame alight and the song full of joy! // paul
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 3:05 PM
sure love can make great music smiling thank you paul for your kindness wonderful comment heartfelt appreciated
Onclaud Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:41 PM
such a jubilant work worthy of an applause, liam.. huggs
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:12 PM
ah nette so very kind of you dear friend deeply appreciated your wonderful comment
Allison Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 11:44 AM
wonderful romantic write Liam i wish i could write as romantically as this but I am trying:-) Hugs Jan xxxx
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 1:11 PM
thank you jan so deeply appreciated your wonderful comment smiling bless you
Manassian Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 11:02 AM
Awwwwww.....she has a beautiful voice. That must be music to your ears, my dear. Lovely write. I'm glad you are high on love.
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:56 PM
smiling always singing in the mind eileen wonderful comment dear friend deeply appreciated
Sietesantos Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 10:57 AM
Liam, this is so lovely! What a beautiful, romantic write. I love it, my friend! Pandita
Mcdaid Avatar
September 26, 2014 at 12:54 PM
thank you pandita truly beautiful comment bless you
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