Never Ending

Without
beginnings
and with no end-
constantly re-writing
itself

Inspired by Floating Poem (light sculpture)
by Ron Arad

Seen on a visit to Swarovski Crystal Exhibition
Copyright © | Year Posted 2009

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Bowen Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 8:21 PM
Profoundly ironic...constantly re writing itself...Good poetry here Brian. Not many poets can pull this off...you are well read and it shows it here. Thanks for the compliment on my featured poem...weird hu? I am thrilled and shocked at the same time. But, anyway, thanks for your encouragement and please keep up the great work....Till another day....bye for now! janers
Winter Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 12:19 PM
I looked it up - your poem is completely awesome! And I so love the title the artist gave to his piece. Wonderful!!! Love, Shar
Richards Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 11:37 AM
Rather like life itself! I love this!! Another inspiration, you always find new ways to make us more aware, Brian! ...love, Carrie (ps..soupmail delivery...when you have time to check)
P. Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 9:55 AM
wonderful writing, Brian... loved the theme to this piece ... and the title is just fitting!! ~ Arany
Gass Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 9:33 AM
This creates so many wonderful images for me, Brian. I posted a Lanterne today and this has the same tone. I am going to look up the "Floating Poem". I want to know more about what inspired this beautiful poetry. This is a wonderful example for your new contest. Thank you for your kind words! Love, Robin
Higgins Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 4:46 AM
Wonderful writing Brian..Love the title to the piece..well done.
Kelly Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 4:42 AM
Crafty presentation , cleverly named , by a Master Craftsman ....
Reynolds Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 2:01 AM
I love this as it speaks of the core of all life, a perfect description of the whole, into my faves, i love it. love, Kristin
Moreno Avatar
March 16, 2009 at 1:45 AM
Brilliant work Brian, without beginnings is nice and so is the title...Raul
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