Andrew Crisci Poet Limerick

Never Daring To Look Down

I stand on the highest cliff shaking,
it's the barest, sharpest reef existing...
never daring to look down;
ravens watch me with a frown, 
but the awful feeling keeps growing.

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Carol Sunshine Brown July 26, 2010 at 12:13 PM Congratulations on your winning poem Andrew in John Freeman's contest"Compromising Dreams". Love,Carol

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 23, 2010 at 9:35 AM Congrats Andrew on your big win in John's contest with this original and unique creative write.. enjoy your spot at the top my friend.. with luv..

Dr.Ram Mehta July 23, 2010 at 3:51 AM A wonderful thought expressed with nice images

Andrea Dietrich July 22, 2010 at 9:58 PM HI, Andrew and congrats on your win in the contest. I think you are getting quite good at these. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman July 22, 2010 at 9:31 PM Congratulations Andrew on your contribution to a fun contest. Agape, Moses

Joyce Johnson July 22, 2010 at 9:24 PM Scary but dreams are like that. Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Doris Culverhouse July 22, 2010 at 12:52 PM sounds like the cherry on high...atop a pie... LOL

Linda-Marie Sweetheart July 22, 2010 at 11:50 AM A good one Andrew for the Limerick contest.. good luck my friend.. my entry is "Nymphette".. since nudity seemed to be the first category.. with luv..