Never

A thousand kisses never touched 
A million touches never felt 
Endless feelings never returned 
Three words never said
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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October 28, 2014 at 1:26 AM
You know I'm re-reading this again and it just clicked. The last line explains the first three. Without the "I love you" all those other feelings never could have happened... wow! I can't believe I didn't notice before... I guess I'm just dense. Lol!
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November 2, 2014 at 6:17 PM
LOL!!! It's all good! ;) That's what I love about poetry. You can get meaning out of it the more times you read it and ponder. Thanks for your insight!! Always love your comments!! :)
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October 27, 2014 at 12:10 PM
Your third line says the most... never returned. Interesting. Oooh the pain of being unnoticed. You know I enjoy minimalist poetry, but with this is left me craving more... does it have to be Never... who says? Keep writing, my friend!
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