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Neutrino

Eyes closed, Hands pushed out into nothing Trying to grasp onto the neutrino That is something beautiful. Open eyes; Bitter-sweet truths of yesterday That have now been ostracized From this treacherous world, Adhering eternally to the night.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 3/26/2009 11:29:00 AM
Dear Zoe, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Neutrino" being Featured this week A bit morbid but Great Write Always...HG
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Date: 3/26/2009 9:08:00 AM
congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!
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Date: 3/26/2009 7:01:00 AM
Congrats Zoe, on "Neutrino" being featured. Vince
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Date: 3/26/2009 4:07:00 AM
Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita
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Date: 3/25/2009 10:02:00 AM
Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/25/2009 8:31:00 AM
Congrats on being featured this week. Great poem! Kirstie
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Date: 3/23/2009 1:38:00 PM
Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)
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Date: 3/23/2009 5:52:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar
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Date: 12/3/2008 2:50:00 AM
Heartwrenching write, dear Zoe. lainie
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Date: 11/20/2008 10:38:00 AM
Nice piece you have here. Loved it 'til the end...Raul
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Date: 11/19/2008 1:16:00 PM
Melancholy... excellent word use and imagery. Very well written! Best wishes, Keith
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Date: 11/15/2008 2:19:00 PM
Great flow, great depth and I love the overall shape to this excellent poem. Such a shame I've come to the end of your posts. Look forward to reading more. Love, Nigel
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