Zoe Campbell Poet Free verse

Neutrino

Eyes closed,
Hands pushed out into nothing
Trying to grasp onto the neutrino
That is something beautiful.

Open eyes;
Bitter-sweet truths of yesterday
That have now been ostracized
From this treacherous world,
Adhering eternally to the night.

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Hgarvey Daniel Esquire March 26, 2009 at 11:29 AM Dear Zoe, Congratulations on YOUR POEM "Neutrino" being Featured this week A bit morbid but Great Write Always...HG

Abe Lopez March 26, 2009 at 9:08 AM congrats on having your poem featured this week! keep up the good work!

Vince Suzadail Jr. March 26, 2009 at 7:01 AM Congrats Zoe, on "Neutrino" being featured. Vince

Lena Townsend March 26, 2009 at 4:07 AM Congratulations on being featured this week. Smiles from Lolita

Carol Sunshine Brown March 25, 2009 at 10:02 AM Congratulations on your excellent poetry being featured this week. Love, Carol

Kirstie Fontes March 25, 2009 at 8:31 AM Congrats on being featured this week. Great poem! Kirstie

Laura Mckenzie March 23, 2009 at 1:38 PM Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)

Sharon Winter March 23, 2009 at 5:52 AM Congratulations on your wonderful poetry being featured this week! Love, Shar

Elaine George December 3, 2008 at 2:50 AM Heartwrenching write, dear Zoe. lainie

Raul Moreno November 20, 2008 at 10:38 AM Nice piece you have here. Loved it 'til the end...Raul

Keith Bickerstaffe November 19, 2008 at 1:16 PM Melancholy... excellent word use and imagery. Very well written! Best wishes, Keith

Nigel Fawcett November 15, 2008 at 2:19 PM Great flow, great depth and I love the overall shape to this excellent poem. Such a shame I've come to the end of your posts. Look forward to reading more. Love, Nigel