William Kelii Kekaula Poet Haiku

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Neuroticism

*Image of Cat Thoughts by PI.

neuroticism

downpour recesses
leaf refuge exits hostage
pitfall disguises

not in use mirror
lain supinely being calm
motion copied cat

intruded ripples
unexpected force a hunch
hissing reflects swells

2022 November 11
#1
2022 Poetry Marathon Mile 20
12/11/2022
#2
*2nd Place*
Writing Challenge - X'd Poems Second Chance
~~Constance La France: Judged 2022 December 05
#3
*HMS

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Constance La France December 10, 2022 at 5:42 PM Hilo, such an interesting poem. Congratulations on your win in my Writing Challenge- x'd poem - Second Chance, well done, and I love the pic too, blessings William Kelii Kekaula December 10, 2022 at 7:13 PM Constance, it was interesting, thank you my friend, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2022 at 3:27 PM that picture. Wow. William Kelii Kekaula November 13, 2022 at 4:18 PM A prized catch, Andrea, Aloha William

Andrea Dietrich November 13, 2022 at 3:26 PM I agree with Sara. Some great creative images in this one. William Kelii Kekaula November 13, 2022 at 4:16 PM Shared views, Andrea, has humble beginnings, my friend, thank you and Aloha William

Sara Kendrick November 13, 2022 at 12:03 PM Creative work for the contest. Way to go. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page. Sara William Kelii Kekaula November 13, 2022 at 12:45 PM Many thanks, Sara, and perpetual prayers, my friend, Aloha William