Nesting

November skies bare all
Perched precociously 
Up stark naked branches
The old abandoned nest

Hatchlings of yesteryear
Outgrow familial nest
Leaving warm comfort behind
To spread their wings

Freely roam expanse of sky
Set forth on their adventures
Explore and forge new nests
Procreating the cycle of life



AP: Honorable Mention 2020

Submitted on April 15, 2020 for contest STRAND PICK A sponsored by BRIAN STRAND  -  RANKED 3RD

and on November 9, 2019 for contest LAST YEAR’S NESTS sponsored by CRAIG CORNISH  -  RANKED 10TH
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Chiri Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 2:07 AM
Line congrats on your win!;)
Gauthier Avatar
April 17, 2020 at 6:53 AM
Thanks, Brenda. Much appreciated.
Kauffman Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 3:46 PM
Hi Line, Congrats on your win! Love the way you expressed the theme of the abandoned nest but hope birthing in the future.
Gauthier Avatar
December 2, 2019 at 11:22 PM
Thanks for your much appreciated visit and comment, Sam.
Na Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 8:01 PM
Congrats on your winning poem Line
Gauthier Avatar
November 30, 2019 at 10:42 PM
Thanks, Gregory. Most appreciated.
Romios Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 5:28 PM
Love this, Line..., PR
Gauthier Avatar
November 15, 2019 at 8:15 PM
Thank you so much, Panagiota.
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