Nessie, Wattie and Kin

Nessie, Wattie and Kin
 
A full ten years before Nessie was first sighted
Colonel Arthur Trimble visited Loch Watten
A dark, looming shape Trimble’s interest ignited
It’s now speculated Nessie has some twins
 
Oceanographers say that before the Ice Age
Loch Ness was connected to the Atlantic sea
So let us turn the history book back a page
A similar creature’s been seen in Lake Erie
 
American cousins for Nessie and Wattie
Giant sea serpent’s been spotted in Lake Champlain
He is known as Champ and Lake Erie’s is Bessie
Four ocean cast outs roam an inland sea domain
 
Could it be that the plesiosaurus lives on
In Scotland as well as in North America
Trapped in these lakes when the Ice Age seas had withdrawn
At same latitudes, but not killers like Orka
 
So if I make my way to see bonnie Scotland
I’ll be chartering a boat, bringing diving gear
In hopes of catching a glimpse of Nessie firsthand
As I explore Loch Ness’s undersea frontier



*Entry for Thvia's contest
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Ramsdale Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 12:46 PM
A winning congratulations! Caryl
Brown Avatar
August 3, 2011 at 7:53 AM
Congratulations on your placement in Thvia's "Indulge Me" contest Carolyn. Love,Carol
Taylor Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 6:58 PM
Congrats on your HM, Carolyn. Awesome. Nice going. luv Ralph
Johnson Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 11:00 AM
Congratulation Carolyn. some good poems in this contest. Love, Joyce
Horne Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:44 AM
Sounds like a wonderful way to get a glimpse of Nessie! Many congrats, Carolyn : )
Onclaud Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 10:14 AM
sweeping, carols...heaps of cheers for to you for your awesome win!! :) huggs!
Mehta Avatar
August 2, 2011 at 9:51 AM
Congratulations on the win in the contest, Carolyn
Zzzzz Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:06 AM
An interesting and entertaining write. I have been to Loch Ness, but I never saw a ripple! Most of the photos have been discredited as fakes, but who knows? We all need a bit of intrigue and tantalizing legend. Good luck in the contest. Robert.
Knop Avatar
April 11, 2011 at 4:58 AM
Oh Carolyn, a great educational write!!! But everything might be possible. I also wonder what Lake Baikal in Russia got for surprises, the world oldest lake and 5,387 ft deep!!! I hope you will manage it some day to visit Bonnie Olde Scotland and to meet Jack and James....and Nessie!!! Wish you best of luck for the contest!...Love, Gert
Haick Avatar
April 10, 2011 at 7:05 PM
That would be a great adventure, Seafaress!! Watching the documentaries about these are so interesting.You've woven a fantastic Rhyme for Thvia's Contest. Will not be a surprise when the Winner's list is released! Love, Annalise
Dietrich Avatar
April 9, 2011 at 12:52 PM
OH, Carolyn, I noticed you used "legendary" to describe my poem for Dr. Ram. heehee. Too bad I could not use it for both contests. I have another one ready for your contest, but I am holding off posting it because I just barely put up the other one!! thanks for your comment.
Skyles-Theoklapoet Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 3:06 PM
OMG how great.It's here"A PRINCESS AND HER DREAM".Thanks Carolyn
Mister Roboto Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 2:00 PM
Is Lake Erie's Bessie ART Models Wife? I am a bitter Brown's Fan! Great Rhyme Carolyn!
Fraser Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 12:09 PM
As you know Carolyn, I stay 5 miles from Loch Ness. I have yet to see anything, but so many do. Re the diving gear. Loch Ness is incredibly deep, and visibilty is not good. It will take great eyes to peer through the murky waters. Good luck in Thvia's contest.....:)
Neels Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 11:58 AM
Carolyn, enjoyed this informative write on Nessie.. I am going with you on your expedition to bonnie Scotland ;) good luck for the contest, love Wilma
Freeman Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 10:29 AM
I didn't do one for this contest, but your poem seems like a nice one for the winner's list. Amazing things can exist right under the human nose, and never seen, Smile. Agape, Moses
Campi Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:33 AM
Thanks for your comment on "my soul" Life is much easier if I let the Lord take over. I enjoyed reading your work here. You seem to have done much research in it. Take car, Jancarl
Onclaud Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:32 AM
oooh, carols... a fantastic journey into the crevices of scotland with impressive poetic insights.. you bring added mystery to loch ness! amazing piece with all my winning bet! :)huggs, nette
Poet Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 9:00 AM
Lots of information here Carolyn!Wonderful write---kash
Horne Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 7:17 AM
Amazing and informative poem, Carolyn - a winner for sure : ) Jack. I've fallen for several unresponsive women in my time LOL but the one in my poem for Dr Ram's contest was John Donne's, not mine - I didn't know his poem, I must confess, and had to read it.
Peranteau Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 6:29 AM
Ironic that you would write this Carolyn...I just wathed a movie from the 70's about ol' Nessie. Great write dear poet! Soup mail my friend...much love, james
Horsman Avatar
April 5, 2011 at 12:50 AM
A Beauty for the contest, Carolyn, a wonderful poem to read, and so informative as well. Good luck. Harry
Sadberry Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 11:40 PM
Smile, *^_^* Fascinating has the lore of Loch Ness always been and yet I somehow believe that its existence could very easily be, far from fiction. = But, I have always loved lovely Nessie so, perhaps I am a bit biased towards the doubters or maybe more so because, I simply love creation, life, dreams and happiness topped with this, the icing of love. == Beautifully brushed canvas painted amid wonderful hues of intrigues presentation, my dear. === love, jasper
Dietrich Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 9:26 PM
hmmm, I have no idea what this contest is. I have sure missed a LOT. Anyway, cool poem on that sea dragon, and it would be so cool if she really existed!!
Mehta Avatar
April 4, 2011 at 6:49 PM
I have not received any email, Carolyn. Please check
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