Nervous

You stand there quivering as a reed in the breeze
So much kept hidden inside
Open the windows of your soul
Set the butterflies free
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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Susan Avatar
May 8, 2012 at 10:02 AM
Very pretty - a great metaphor :)
Davis Avatar
March 31, 2012 at 2:25 AM
A fine, crisp write :-)
Pettit Avatar
February 4, 2012 at 3:57 PM
I agree with Debbie below.
Guzzi Avatar
February 3, 2012 at 9:34 AM
great metaphor! Light & Love
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