Freddie Robinson Jr. Poet Rhyme

Neon Idol Attraction

Las Vegas    ...    a gangster’s irradiated dream

Sin city    ...    all that glitter glow ain’t what it seems

Neon idols    ...    false lights beckon the human flies

One-arm lovers    ...    giving fifty-two kisses of plastic coated lies 

Spinning red satin black bed    ...   promising to satisfy every drunken lust

Non-believers    ...    in the Devil, they do blindly trust

The game of con    ...    it’s a brothel house affair

Papier seduction    ...    blood money lines their coffin lair

Viva Las Vegas    ...    welcome to the American Idol nightmare

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Richard Lamoureux May 12, 2019 at 7:56 AM Your pen’s potency has not diminished. Exceptional!

Winged Warrior May 2, 2019 at 7:03 PM Loved this one Freddie... you're in top form my friend...so unique, your poetry is...hope all is well...happy endings...^WW^...{*J*}

Gershon Wolf April 30, 2019 at 3:35 AM Truer words rarely penned, my friend...although there's a Chabad House in Vegas now, at least one strong ray of light. Blessings, Gershon

Kim Rodrigues April 29, 2019 at 8:22 PM So true! Gaudy and loud with clanging slot machines. Funny story: we went to Circus World with our daughter. She wanted to win her boyfriend a huge spongebob. So she gets rings to throw on the bottles. She with all earnest wanted to win and I said a prayer. She hands me the rings. Well, Freddie, I am not good at these games. Yup, God’s good humor was with me and I won. So I told the lady about the prayer and she almost looked shocked that a Christian was in her midst. Be blessed my good friend!

Carole Duet April 28, 2019 at 2:37 PM So true, Freddie. I had to comment on this one. I don't believe in gambling. It can be so tempting to take a chance on winning big but the reality is that it's rigged against you and when someone loses sometimes it affects their whole family. Great poem with a great message.

Lawrence Sharp April 27, 2019 at 12:46 AM A cuttingly good write, Mr Fred, point very well made.

Heidi Sands April 26, 2019 at 1:28 PM Great one Freddie. I hope you are well. This packs a punch! :)

Alexis Y. April 26, 2019 at 11:23 AM Hi Freddie, It's good to read your "one" of a kind hard hitting poetry. Excellent job like always:-) Alexis