Neil Peart Plus

fish eye lenses pretenses all the worlds a stage we are merely pretenders triple entendre RUSH to see the Moving Pictures cry as they go by taken away from tonight's Limelight ~JSL

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Scott Thirtyseven

Date: 7/9/2014 2:14:00 AM

I've come to see you for inspiration. I'm trying to write a piece with a similar slick spoken word play, that you have in your poems. But the last stanza is too short. Just not working for me. Need more guidance.

James Fraser

Date: 7/3/2014 2:19:00 PM

Fine poem about one of my favourite bands, and most definitely the worlds best drummer. Neil's solo's are simply orchestral. Nice one ( Styx's 'Mr Roboto' ) domo arigato, James.....

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 7/2/2014 10:21:00 PM

~JSL~ We sure are the best pretenders. What more can I say. This sure fits someone I know... :) LINDA

Nette Onclaud

Date: 7/2/2014 5:06:00 PM

wow, a burst of abstract images.. yes, JS!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 7/2/2014 6:30:00 AM

- Well written .... a unique write, JSL !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 7/1/2014 6:57:00 PM

very interesting . I especially like how you ended it kind of tongue and cheek it felt to me. Reminding me of the fleeting seconds of fame so many of us strive for.