Jslambert Mister Roboto Poet Rhyme

Neil Peart Plus

fish eye lenses
pretenses 
all the worlds a stage
we are merely pretenders

triple entendre 
RUSH to see
the Moving Pictures

cry as they go by 
taken away 
from tonight's 
Limelight 


~JSL

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Scott Thirtyseven July 9, 2014 at 2:14 AM I've come to see you for inspiration. I'm trying to write a piece with a similar slick spoken word play, that you have in your poems. But the last stanza is too short. Just not working for me. Need more guidance.

James Fraser July 3, 2014 at 2:19 PM Fine poem about one of my favourite bands, and most definitely the worlds best drummer. Neil's solo's are simply orchestral. Nice one ( Styx's 'Mr Roboto' ) domo arigato, James.....

Poet Destroyer A July 2, 2014 at 10:21 PM ~JSL~ We sure are the best pretenders. What more can I say. This sure fits someone I know... :) LINDA

Nette Onclaud July 2, 2014 at 5:06 PM wow, a burst of abstract images.. yes, JS!.. huggs

Anne-Lise Andresen July 2, 2014 at 6:30 AM - Well written .... a unique write, JSL !!! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

Andrea Dietrich July 1, 2014 at 6:57 PM very interesting . I especially like how you ended it kind of tongue and cheek it felt to me. Reminding me of the fleeting seconds of fame so many of us strive for.