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Nameless, Nightmare, Neglect Contest

Sponsor: Constance La France    11/18/2023

"The worst feeling is to be ignored once, then twice, then again and again by someone you consider precious." by Betsy Kenton Life's bittersweet lessons have taught me well that on the ones we love most, we should dwell. Not chained or tethered as a master to his slave. Love, given freely will not yield reason to grieve, but if neglected, a broken heart will perceive the bond's been broken and passion it will waive. Do not express your tender words of devotion and later tell me you were wrought with emotion. I'd rather not have known the taste of your lips if now you ignore me with indifference and neglect. I'd walk away from you if treated with disrespect, if what you once felt is in the state of total eclipse. Love can bring tears of sadness or joy to one's eyes. To be slighted or snubbed can lead to ardor's demise, but to be cherished in love's embrace fulfills the need of nurturing each other as dew sates a flower's thirst. Being slighted by someone you hold dear is the worst feeling when the roots wither after planting love's seed.

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Date: 11/26/2023 9:23:00 PM
"Love can bring tears of sadness or joy to one's eyes. To be slighted or snubbed can lead to ardor's demise" - Great writing. Congratulations!
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Date: 11/26/2023 8:26:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! I Love This Write/Great ending. So very true. FAV... Have a great/wonderful day writing away...........
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/26/2023 8:35:00 AM
Thanks so much, Paula. Hoping you have a great Sunday.
Date: 11/18/2023 2:27:00 PM
a fantastic rhyme scheme and touching poem with some great advice. There's nothing worse than being ignored. Ignore me once, shame on you. Ignore me twice, shame on me! My favorite lines are: Love, given freely will not yield reason to grieve, but if neglected, a broken heart will perceive the bond's been broken and passion it will waive. Lovely poem, Lin. Have a splendid weekend, Sara
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/19/2023 7:09:00 AM
I am always grateful for your wonderful commentary on my poetry, Sara. How graciously you compliment the poetry of others. Thank you, and my wish for you and Bill is to enjoy Thanksgiving.
Date: 11/18/2023 9:33:00 AM
A very thoughtful poem. Choices are important. Thanks for the poem.
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Date: 11/18/2023 10:18:00 AM
Thanks for the read and comments, Hilda.
Date: 11/18/2023 7:54:00 AM
Lin you chose the perfect quote to go with the poem, rejection - a theme many of us can relate not necessarily someone we were in a relationship with but slighted by a member of ones own family ... to that I relate big time! hugs Jan xxx
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Lin Lane
Date: 11/18/2023 9:29:00 AM
I know exactly what you mean, Jan. Thanks for liking the poem and the quote.
Date: 11/18/2023 7:11:00 AM
"Love can bring tears of sadness or joy to one's eyes. To be slighted or snubbed can lead to ardor's demise," -- Love...or absence of love, is all powerful. Atomic weapons can annihilate the body...but only love can make or break the soul. Thoughtful write. Gets one thinking.
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Date: 11/18/2023 9:29:00 AM
The soul and the heart, Joe. Nothing injures us like being abandoned or neglected. Thank you for your thoughts.

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