Negitive Mind

I love writing poetry.
I write whatever's on my mind.
I cant think of anything positive to write.
All I can think about is all the trouble I'v been through in my life.

That's not good.
This is not how I want to be.
I want to be somone posistive 
not somone who is full of negitivity.

I'll just pray about it.
Sombody pray for me.
I dont want to live the rest of my life depressed and angry.
That's not good for my babies and it sure aint good for me.
I will not allow any more drama in my life.
No more crying myself to sleep at night.
 
I cant change him and his selfish ways.
He's one reason why I'm depressed every day.

I feel like the biggest fool. 
Oh here I go agean with my negitive thoughts.
I cant have him in my life anymore. He can stay pissed off.

Just going to leave it in God's hands. I'm going to take my babies and leave.
Need to be in a more posistive enviroment. No more drama for me.
It's not worth it.
Need to be in a positive enviroment.
My babies deserve it.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2011

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That Archaic Poet Avatar
September 5, 2013 at 9:19 AM
I can relate to you in the fact that I rarely have something positive to write about, but poetry and other artistic mediums help me deal with my struggles. I don't know what I would do without these outlets. The only problem with this piece are the spelling errors (which are easily fixed). Good job conveying a very relatable subject for all artists :)
Laboni Avatar
May 14, 2011 at 1:43 PM
Its wonderful..
Mayes Avatar
May 6, 2011 at 8:47 PM
I agree...Hurt plus pain = great words....
Mister Roboto Avatar
April 26, 2011 at 8:48 PM
In my opinion depression makes for better writing! So cheer up for you, or don't cheer up for us...lol. Smile. ~JSLambert
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