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Negative Begets the Positive

Don't you jive me no more blues You take this my gin my booze One here needs to get a life Talk of Christ on my world cruise. 18/3/2020 Entered into Jenish Somadas Let the pen flow Poetry Contest.

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Anil Deo

Date: 3/21/2020 1:04:00 AM

Let's ditch the Bible-talk and talk ... CORONA, the big beer import from Mexico. Where? to the USA! now the border is closed by Trump (Corona gets through the holes!!!) shalom Sir Harry

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/20/2020 8:49:00 PM

Booze and the Blues. I am jiving to it!!

Quoth Theraven

Date: 3/18/2020 11:36:00 PM

harry, I love this Jueju's standing waveform. Sweet serenade to help fill my cup. Whether boxcars or snakes eyes, I really can't say., let the dice roll with a shake, and land where they may. -Richard

Richard Lamoureux

Date: 3/18/2020 8:52:00 AM

I’ve seen a few now in this form. I’m not familiar with it but like the result. Blessings Rick.

Vijay Pandit

Date: 3/18/2020 8:13:00 AM

Booze certainly helps sooth the blues---all the best, Harry.

Eve Roper

Date: 3/17/2020 9:10:00 PM

Love the way you expressed the bad needs to be inspired by the good. Good Luck in the contest.