Harry Horsman Poet Jueju

Negative Begets the Positive

Don't you jive me no more blues
You take this my gin my booze
One here needs to get a life
Talk of Christ on my world cruise.

18/3/2020
Entered into Jenish Somadas
Let the pen flow Poetry Contest.

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Anil Deo March 21, 2020 at 1:04 AM Let's ditch the Bible-talk and talk ... CORONA, the big beer import from Mexico. Where? to the USA! now the border is closed by Trump (Corona gets through the holes!!!) shalom Sir Harry

Andrea Dietrich March 20, 2020 at 8:49 PM Booze and the Blues. I am jiving to it!!

Quoth Theraven March 18, 2020 at 11:36 PM harry, I love this Jueju's standing waveform. Sweet serenade to help fill my cup. Whether boxcars or snakes eyes, I really can't say., let the dice roll with a shake, and land where they may. -Richard

Richard Lamoureux March 18, 2020 at 8:52 AM I’ve seen a few now in this form. I’m not familiar with it but like the result. Blessings Rick.

Vijay Pandit March 18, 2020 at 8:13 AM Booze certainly helps sooth the blues---all the best, Harry.

Eve Roper March 17, 2020 at 9:10 PM Love the way you expressed the bad needs to be inspired by the good. Good Luck in the contest.