Needy-Haibun Free-Style Contest

Haibun Free-Style Contest
Sponsor:  Scott Thirtyseven

When is my head going to be straight edged? There is so much more to me than my past and my mistakes. I love a lot. I care too much and it always turns against my life, causing tornado's and hurricanes. So...where do I go from here? I'm sorry I can't change what I did. What do I need? What am I needing so badly, I over extend my love and care towards people who don't understand and are not my emotional level? I'm tired of losing people. They run when I cry. Get scared when I feel. They are uncomfortable with my emotions and apparently I can't keep hold of them. I have restricted freedom and they flee as far as they can...

                       Why am I needy?
                           My concern runs too deeply,
                                I cry they depart.

Goodbye..that is all I ever hear, 
Uplifted by staples left me in fear.

Inadvertently forgotten without strings attached, 
Confused, overwhelmed and inappropriately detached.

                          Needing attention
                             Demanding reassurance
                                 Indigent request







Written By: Laura Urbaniak
Date: November 9, 2015
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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A   Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 7:23 PM
Laura, Congrats on your Haibun Free-Style win. ~LINDA~
Thirtyseven Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 12:38 PM
Nice Haibun, the prose and Haiku fit together nicely. But unfortunately this is not what I was looking for in this Haibun FreeStyle contest.
Scars Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 7:57 PM
Thanks anyways
A  Avatar
December 20, 2015 at 11:13 AM
LAURA:) NICE HM..... SKAT
Allison Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 1:09 PM
This is very deep and sad Laura - I think many can relate to this scenario but there is only so much giving a person can do - good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx7
Scars Avatar
November 9, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Thank you very much Jan :) Be blessed and have a great night! -LU
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