Needlework of a Quiet Mind


Written: May 2nd, 2025 for Brian Stand contest *********************** spools of emotion n e e d l e stitching memory a patchwork of thought
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Empress Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 10:39 AM
This is so creative dr sotto! I love how youv played around with words and presented a very unique hiku! I especially love " stitching memory" and "patchwork of thought" and the way youv presented your wordplay is artistic and visually pleasing! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes in the contest! Sending you light always
Anaya Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 9:58 AM
Dear Sotto Poet, you have woven an eye of a needle to amuse, and a memorable piece. Excellence ~ xhugs
Andresen Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 6:08 AM
- Many thoughts are involved in the work, Las :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs
Williams Avatar
May 3, 2025 at 5:45 AM
Seamlessly put together, no pun intended dear Sotto. Good luck in the contest...Hugs
George Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 11:29 PM
Beautifully you have knitted together words into a meaningful patchwork. All the Best.
Beaufort Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 6:44 PM
SP...love it. the way you weave emotion into memory and thought is profound. It's part of the recipe for a well-balanced life and a happy one too. Take care and smiles!!
Hind Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 12:16 PM
Deep haiku, Sotto :)
Goldsmith Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 12:09 PM
What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away..........
Meadows Avatar
May 2, 2025 at 10:27 AM
A clever poem. Well done!!
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