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Needlework of a Quiet Mind

Written: May 2nd, 2025 for Brian Stand contest *********************** spools of emotion n e e d l e stitching memory a patchwork of thought

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Ink Empress

Date: 5/3/2025 10:39:00 AM

This is so creative dr sotto! I love how youv played around with words and presented a very unique hiku! I especially love " stitching memory" and "patchwork of thought" and the way youv presented your wordplay is artistic and visually pleasing! Pleasure reading this! Best wishes in the contest! Sending you light always

I Am Anaya

Date: 5/3/2025 9:58:00 AM

Dear Sotto Poet, you have woven an eye of a needle to amuse, and a memorable piece. Excellence ~ xhugs

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/3/2025 6:08:00 AM

- Many thoughts are involved in the work, Las :) - Good luck in the contest :) - Have a lovely weekend :) - hugs

Maria Williams

Date: 5/3/2025 5:45:00 AM

Seamlessly put together, no pun intended dear Sotto. Good luck in the contest...Hugs

Valsa George

Date: 5/2/2025 11:29:00 PM

Beautifully you have knitted together words into a meaningful patchwork. All the Best.

Duke Beaufort

Date: 5/2/2025 6:44:00 PM

SP...love it. the way you weave emotion into memory and thought is profound. It's part of the recipe for a well-balanced life and a happy one too. Take care and smiles!!

Paige Hind

Date: 5/2/2025 12:16:00 PM

Deep haiku, Sotto :)

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/2/2025 12:09:00 PM

What a creative/fun write you have here. Love It... "Good Luck" Have a lovely day/weekend writing away..........

Daisy Meadows

Date: 5/2/2025 10:27:00 AM

A clever poem. Well done!!