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Can't imagine the frustration that would be..

Needle In the Hay Today

It was my very last needle
He took it to the barn
To sew a harness_ darn!

He dropped it in the hay
I guess it's there to stay
Now that ruins my day

No money to buy one
No way to earn more
You bet I am very sore

Sponsor: Dana'lynn Smith
Contest: Needle In The Hay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012

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June 3, 2012 at 7:37 PM
SARA, I SEE THIS IS A WONDERFUL WIN, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD
Williams Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 1:49 PM
Sara congrast on your win..David
Brown Avatar
June 1, 2012 at 1:22 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contestSara . Love, Carol
Song Avatar
March 19, 2012 at 10:23 AM
ha ha....who said he could go through your seamstress' box anyways, right? Cute entry here, Sara. Hope he doesn't sit down and find the needle accidentally! Youch!!! Love, Gwendolen
Babcock Avatar
March 16, 2012 at 4:03 PM
Enjoyed this cute write Sara. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments. love phyl
Horne Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 4:40 PM
Enjoyed this cute, imaginative piece, Sara. I haven't checked the winners lists yet, but I'm sure you've done well in contests - many congrats on your wins : )
Onclaud Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 11:08 AM
charming, sara.. love the way this progressed... winning bet for me!... really cute!..:) hugggs!.. hello to karter
Eastman Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 10:46 AM
Fun Read... very enjoyable... so like life...
Horsman Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 9:22 AM
like this Sara, it's different. harry
Goller Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 8:27 AM
That's a lovely story with a touch of humor.I enjoyed reading it.God Bless you. Hugs!Erich
Sivey Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 7:46 AM
Ha ha, it's kinda humorous this write is. But that's horrible, not being able to get another needle! I'm sure that this has happened before! Maybe not exactly like this, but something very close to it! To lose something that you really need is so very frustrating! It would make me very sore as well! This is a wonderful write Sara! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem that I have read this morning! Great Work!!
Nair Avatar
March 15, 2012 at 7:46 AM
Lovely write, simple and straight,good luck, jag
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