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Can't imagine the frustration that would be..

Needle In the Hay Today

It was my very last needle
He took it to the barn
To sew a harness_ darn!

He dropped it in the hay
I guess it's there to stay
Now that ruins my day

No money to buy one
No way to earn more
You bet I am very sore

Sponsor: Dana'lynn Smith
Contest: Needle In The Hay
Copyright © | Year Posted 2012


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Date: 6/3/2012 7:37:00 PM
SARA, I SEE THIS IS A WONDERFUL WIN, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:49:00 PM
Sara congrast on your win..David
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Date: 6/1/2012 1:22:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contestSara . Love, Carol
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Date: 3/19/2012 10:23:00 AM
ha ha....who said he could go through your seamstress' box anyways, right? Cute entry here, Sara. Hope he doesn't sit down and find the needle accidentally! Youch!!! Love, Gwendolen
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Date: 3/16/2012 4:03:00 PM
Enjoyed this cute write Sara. Good luck in the contest. Thanks for your comments. love phyl
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Date: 3/15/2012 4:40:00 PM
Enjoyed this cute, imaginative piece, Sara. I haven't checked the winners lists yet, but I'm sure you've done well in contests - many congrats on your wins : )
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Date: 3/15/2012 11:08:00 AM
charming, sara.. love the way this progressed... winning bet for me!... really cute!..:) hugggs!.. hello to karter
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Date: 3/15/2012 10:46:00 AM
Fun Read... very enjoyable... so like life...
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Date: 3/15/2012 9:22:00 AM
like this Sara, it's different. harry
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Date: 3/15/2012 8:27:00 AM
That's a lovely story with a touch of humor.I enjoyed reading it.God Bless you. Hugs!Erich
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Date: 3/15/2012 7:46:00 AM
Lovely write, simple and straight,good luck, jag
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Date: 3/15/2012 7:46:00 AM
Ha ha, it's kinda humorous this write is. But that's horrible, not being able to get another needle! I'm sure that this has happened before! Maybe not exactly like this, but something very close to it! To lose something that you really need is so very frustrating! It would make me very sore as well! This is a wonderful write Sara! I thoroughly enjoyed this poem that I have read this morning! Great Work!!
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