Christopher Bunton Poet Limerick

Needle In the Hay

Jack and Jill were in the barn one day,

when Jack spoke of a game to play.

But, when the door was shut,

something poked Jill in the butt.

It seems she found a needle in the hay.



For the "Needle in the hay" contest

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Poet Destroyer A June 3, 2012 at 7:35 PM CHRISTOPHER, Congratulations with your awesome “Needle in the hay” entry. Have a nice one... always~ PD

Sara Kendrick June 1, 2012 at 5:00 PM Congrats on your winning work..That Jack and Jill are always into something...Sara

David Williams June 1, 2012 at 1:46 PM Christopher congrats on your win..David Christopher Bunton June 1, 2012 at 3:25 PM Thank you

Carol Sunshine Brown June 1, 2012 at 1:18 PM Congratulations on your win in the "Needles in the Hay" contest Christopher. Love, Carol Christopher Bunton June 1, 2012 at 3:25 PM Thank you

Michael J. Falotico March 7, 2012 at 6:59 PM Lol good one my friend. Christopher Bunton March 7, 2012 at 7:39 PM Thank you!!

Kim Merryman March 7, 2012 at 5:17 PM Good one, Christopher. Best wishes in the contest. Love, Kim Christopher Bunton March 7, 2012 at 7:39 PM Thank you!!