Needing a Shooting Star

Looking into midnight sky,
searching for a shooting star.
I really could use a wish or two right now.
I would wish to rewind time,
so I could tell  I'm sorry for  ever hurting you.
And to say I love you to your face.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Reyna Avatar
October 22, 2010 at 11:37 AM
i could used a shooting star too for a wish or two. it always need miracle to change life. love this.
Emerald Avatar
October 5, 2010 at 5:32 PM
scary to think how many people go through the same thing...you feel so alone but so many feel this way... i like this poem. great work
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September 11, 2010 at 1:03 PM
deep feelings in this write, enjoyed reading ..P.D.
Falotico Avatar
September 11, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Very hear felt write...been there to in life..sometimes you get a 2nd chance. just look for it...always Michael
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