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Needing a Shooting Star

Looking into midnight sky, searching for a shooting star. I really could use a wish or two right now. I would wish to rewind time, so I could tell I'm sorry for ever hurting you. And to say I love you to your face.

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Mony Reyna

Date: 10/22/2010 11:37:00 AM

i could used a shooting star too for a wish or two. it always need miracle to change life. love this.

Ryan Emerald

Date: 10/5/2010 5:32:00 PM

scary to think how many people go through the same thing...you feel so alone but so many feel this way... i like this poem. great work

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 9/11/2010 1:03:00 PM

deep feelings in this write, enjoyed reading ..P.D.

Michael J. Falotico

Date: 9/11/2010 8:47:00 AM

Very hear felt write...been there to in life..sometimes you get a 2nd chance. just look for it...always Michael