Needed To Use Wisely

NEEDED TO USE WISELY

Morning dew splatters upon my head
I stand on a point thinking of what to do for tomorrow
yesterday slipped through my fingers 
as autumn slipped through summer
today is about to pass me by
as 29th is about to pass through 30th
yet my tomorrow is unknown
why not wait for me time?
My age increase everyday
While I still on a point thinking of what to do
Winter passes me by made to shiver,
Evoke the image of a friend I saw yesterday in an exotic car
Tears roll like stream from my eyes to mouth,
I taste the sweetness of laziness
Whom should I blame except me………………….
Time is precious, needed to use wisely

Copyright © | Year Posted 2015



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Date: 7/6/2015 6:49:00 AM
Ask and it shall be given, Seek and you shall find. Knock and the door will be opened and you will not be left behind. For He is Alpha and Omega the beginning and the end. Our Lord, Our Savior, Our Father and Friend... THIS DAY. Be Blessed.
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Date: 7/4/2015 5:33:00 PM
AM nicely penned 7 oh yes time is fleeting and precious and thanks for visiting my senryu 13
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Date: 7/2/2015 9:05:00 PM
time indeed is precious, enjoyed your free verse:)*luv p.d.
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Date: 7/2/2015 4:38:00 AM
wonderful awakenings, afolabi.. so well composed!.. huggs
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/2/2015 9:49:00 AM
People must awake from their laziness so as to not let their destiny slip through their fingers. Thanks for your comment it's really appreciated......A.M.
Date: 7/1/2015 5:12:00 PM
Very expressive and emotive work..I enjoyed reading this one today..Thank you for your presence at my work..I appreciate you reading Yellow Bouquet..Sara
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/2/2015 8:57:00 AM
Thank you for your pleasantly comment. Stay blessed
Date: 7/1/2015 9:09:00 AM
Afolabi, lovely reminder.. full of wisdom that we must live to the fullest and make each moment meaningful! Nicely written! ~Olive ELoisa
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/1/2015 1:39:00 PM
Time goes as honey of a spoon, its wait for no one nor its can be hold or encroach upon, that is why one must make a while the sun shine. Thank you for stopped by to read and comment on my poem.....stay blessed......A.M.
Date: 7/1/2015 12:06:00 AM
You have creatively expressed the passing of time in this wonderful poem, Afolabi. I feel the slipping away of time with each passing day, as well. Really enjoyed this!
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Afolabi Muideen
Date: 7/1/2015 2:48:00 AM
Thank you vary much Laura, your comment is really appreciated. There are so many people like me out there stand on a point thinking of what to do for future, they forget time is our enemy today, tomorrow, tomorrow......... Their future will soon reach them at corner. Thanks.......A.M.
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