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Need the Latrine

Trying to get back to some kind of routine My body's all aching and I need the latrine System's all screwed Don't want to be crude But the contents of my bladder could fill a ravine © Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal

Date: 5/20/2015 4:56:00 AM

"But the contents of my bladder could fill a ravine" haha LOVE it!! Hope you're doing okay here Jack! Hope you have a relaxing rest of the week..Always, Laura : )

Jaycee Cervenka

Date: 5/19/2015 3:55:00 PM

At least its just the bladder Jack! It could be a bit worse..LOL. Traveling can be hard on the system. =-/ ((U)) ~Jan

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 5:58:00 PM

YES thankfully it's just my bladder!!! LOL Love and hugs, Jacko xxx

Carol Eastman

Date: 5/19/2015 11:20:00 AM

WOW! Must have been some kind of trip to leave you like that... Dragon, Hubby, and I want you to take care of yourself...

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 11:47:00 AM

Oh I paint a worse picture than it really is... I'm a tough old bird! LOL xxxxx

Jan Allison

Date: 5/19/2015 11:00:00 AM

ha ha ha this is very funny Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 11:45:00 AM

Ahead of the big move next Tuesday, moving all the small stuff and stuff we never or will ever use again! Why do we do this??? LOL Glad my silly wee limerick gave you a giggle, dear sis! Huggs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith

Date: 5/19/2015 8:19:00 AM

Got to stay hydrated in the heat

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 8:23:00 AM

OKAY enough already... they're really screwing me up this morning! Grrrr! Thanks for the sound advice, Mr. Tim! LOL

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 8:21:00 AM

LOL LOL! Judy my darling, can always count on you for a smile!!! Love and big huggeroonies, Wacko Jacko xxxx

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 8:20:00 AM

LOL LOL! Judy my darling, can always count on you for a smile!!! Love and big huggeroonies, Wacko Jacko xxxx

Judy Konos

Date: 5/19/2015 8:09:00 AM

YELLOW to the Front;. . . BROWN to the Back!. . . .Good Luck!

Jack Ellison
Date: 5/19/2015 8:21:00 AM

LOL LOL! Judy my darling, can always count on you for a smile!!! Love and big huggeroonies, Wacko Jacko xxxx