Jack Ellison Poet Limerick

Need the Latrine

Trying to get back to some kind of routine
My body's all aching and I need the latrine
System's all screwed
Don't want to be crude
But the contents of my bladder could fill a ravine


© Jack Ellison 2015

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Laura Breidenthal May 20, 2015 at 4:56 AM "But the contents of my bladder could fill a ravine" haha LOVE it!! Hope you're doing okay here Jack! Hope you have a relaxing rest of the week..Always, Laura : )

Jaycee Cervenka May 19, 2015 at 3:55 PM At least its just the bladder Jack! It could be a bit worse..LOL. Traveling can be hard on the system. =-/ ((U)) ~Jan Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 5:58 PM YES thankfully it's just my bladder!!! LOL Love and hugs, Jacko xxx

Carol Eastman May 19, 2015 at 11:20 AM WOW! Must have been some kind of trip to leave you like that... Dragon, Hubby, and I want you to take care of yourself... Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 11:47 AM Oh I paint a worse picture than it really is... I'm a tough old bird! LOL xxxxx

Jan Allison May 19, 2015 at 11:00 AM ha ha ha this is very funny Jack:-) Hugs Jan xx Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 11:45 AM Ahead of the big move next Tuesday, moving all the small stuff and stuff we never or will ever use again! Why do we do this??? LOL Glad my silly wee limerick gave you a giggle, dear sis! Huggs, Jack xxx

Tim Smith May 19, 2015 at 8:19 AM Got to stay hydrated in the heat Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 8:23 AM OKAY enough already... they're really screwing me up this morning! Grrrr! Thanks for the sound advice, Mr. Tim! LOL Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 8:21 AM LOL LOL! Judy my darling, can always count on you for a smile!!! Love and big huggeroonies, Wacko Jacko xxxx Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 8:20 AM LOL LOL! Judy my darling, can always count on you for a smile!!! Love and big huggeroonies, Wacko Jacko xxxx

Judy Konos May 19, 2015 at 8:09 AM YELLOW to the Front;. . . BROWN to the Back!. . . .Good Luck! Jack Ellison May 19, 2015 at 8:21 AM LOL LOL! Judy my darling, can always count on you for a smile!!! Love and big huggeroonies, Wacko Jacko xxxx