Need a Cuddle, Are You Available

Need a cuddle, are you available? Promise not to linger too long Perhaps seven or possibly eight hours Maybe till the break of dawn Enough time to satisfy this craving That lingers day and night Soon gonna wind up in the loony bin If I can't taste your sweet delights Need a cuddle, are you available? To take me to heaven's door Promise not to overstay my welcome Till eternity, not a moment more Must've done something, don't know what To deserve your tender love Can't think of what it could have been But you've given my heart a shove Succumbed to your delicate beauty Many many years ago The flame's stayed alive for all this time Still making this old heart glow Need a cuddle, are you available? Promise not to linger too long Maybe an eternity plus ten lifetimes An eternity filled with song © Jack Ellison 2013

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Date: 10/3/2013 11:59:00 AM
Jack...Your very BEST one yet! WOW! Hot and steamy...your cuddling bit didn't fool me! This was passion all the way. Great write...
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Date: 10/3/2013 12:14:00 PM
You're rubbing me... oops... you're rubbing off on me, so to speak! LOL WOWSERS... best one yet... may I quote you, my dear Miss Boop!!! Love Kenny xoxox
Date: 10/3/2013 8:45:00 AM
Oh! Oh! Grandpa Troll decided to find some forever love... He'd have to grabe his target and hold on tight... Yes his version of a hug!... Gee! Grandpa Troll! She's got to be willing.!.. And have stars in her eyes too!... NO! Put the club DOWN!... That's not what I meant! Trolls... Honestly!... Might take a bit more explaining... You can try again tomorrow... LOL
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Date: 10/3/2013 9:49:00 AM
Tell your guys, I couldn't live without hearing about their exploits! xxxxx
Date: 10/3/2013 7:30:00 AM
What a charming write!!!! "Tender love"...indeed sir. Awesome!
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Date: 10/3/2013 7:52:00 AM
The old man's still got it eh!!!! LOL Have a good one, my friend!
Date: 10/3/2013 6:50:00 AM
Yes lol xx
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Date: 10/3/2013 7:51:00 AM
Be right over on the next flight! LOL Hugs xoxox
Date: 10/3/2013 6:31:00 AM
Jack, this is such a sweet write, your ending made me smile :) need to read more of these tender writes on love :)
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Date: 10/3/2013 6:37:00 AM
My mushy side is showing! LOL Big mushy hugs, dear Wilma xoxoxox
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