Need

I crave your lips I have yet to kiss. The touch I have yet to feel. The fingertips That have yet to wander. The tongue That has yet to taste. The weight of you That has yet to crush me. The look in your eyes, When you give yourself completely. I crave you The one I have yet to have.

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Diane M Quinlan

Date: 5/27/2015 2:16:00 PM

A great love write. The want to find that 'one' is well versed and your words drew me well into the read! Congratulations on your win---thank you for sharing. didee

Ken Jordan

Date: 5/25/2015 11:20:00 PM

Mind blowing! Thanks for the visual, I've this steamy Piece. Stay strong Ken

Skat A

Date: 5/24/2015 11:13:00 PM

KAYLA, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

Skat A

Date: 5/9/2015 9:00:00 PM

Kayla, Stopping by with a nice, sweet Welcome to Poetry Soup. I will get much delight in reading and in time become familiar with your verse. As for now, I will greet you with the same smile others passed when I first joined the soup. Wishing you and your poetry the best. I hope you get to meet all the nice poets around here STARTING with me- SKAT :-) Please drop a hello and tell me a little about yourself if you wish. I would like to be your newest poetry soup "FRIEND" Hugs* SKAT

Jan Allison

Date: 5/8/2015 4:00:00 PM

Lovely imagery ... i hope you meet the one you desire:-) Hugs Jan xx

Kayla Marie
Date: 5/9/2015 11:07:00 AM

I have, I just can't have him. Thank you

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 5/8/2015 1:52:00 PM

Kayla, A nice warm WELCOME to poetry soup. I hope you have fun with this wonderful community. You'll find many friendly poets who are ready to support and give positive feedback. I will enjoy following you and your poetry when you are ready :) We are Lucky To Have you. Enjoy Poetry Soup:) Your New Poet Friend @-> LINDA <-@

Kayla Marie
Date: 5/9/2015 11:07:00 AM

Thank you