Nectar

Nectar 




When the blue sky fades
appears the red sunset,
Orange purple hues.
Twilight soon descends
softly to a quiet night, 

Men that burnt their toil
through another tough day,
Walk amidst majestic oaks 
Ferns and bushes,
Sound of crushing leaves.

Sweet morning sunrise,
crops rippling in the breeze,
A smile of content on face
buzzing of bees,
nectar of joy in the heart.




Written August 1st, 2015
For contest "Nature poem" by Shadow
Copyright © | Year Posted 2015

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Delaney Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 5:53 PM
Congratulations on your win. Joy is a sweet nectar. Well done. SuZ
Inman Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 9:13 AM
I know this sounds silly, but the first thing that popped into my mind after reading your work is; how poetic! Beautiful.
Kendrick Avatar
August 5, 2015 at 8:55 AM
Perfect nature poem indeed…Way to go with this win..Congrats!!Sara
Ward Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 11:14 PM
It is lovely how you wove Shadow's words into your winning poem. Congratulations from Julia, xx
A  Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 9:43 PM
Dr Upma, Congratulations on your win..... SKAT
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:57 PM
Thnx Skat for ur kind words!
Hamilton Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 5:52 PM
a very sweet poem Dr Upma congrats on placing
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:56 PM
Thnx Shadow, delightful contests I love to enter!
Roberts Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:50 PM
loved it Dr Upma, many congrats....Seren
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Appreciate ur visit, thnx Seren!
Allison Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 4:17 PM
beautiful imagery Dr Sharma many congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:55 PM
Thnx for ur always kind visits n congrats!
Guillermo - Fraser Avatar
August 3, 2015 at 3:00 AM
Dr. Upma, such a delightful image! good flow as always! luck in the contest!~Olive Eloisa.. =')
A. Sharma Avatar
August 4, 2015 at 10:54 PM
Thnx dear Olive
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