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Nectar

On what breasts I have laid my head And where and why I remember not. On what waists have I laid my hands Feeling the spring tide bosoms and Lips were too near not to be missed To get the feel of the rose petals. Upon my couch I lay as lie the dead, Many loves have come and gone No images return on this stormy night, The wind sings in my foliage, The rain taps & sighs on the windowsills. I have forgotten all of them but one. In my heart there stirs a sweet pain When I remember my sweet Nectar On this day of Thirtieth September When she came to me as virgin fresh We made love till the early hours of the morn Hearing the distant drums of a ritual dance.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 5/18/2010 1:33:00 AM
Dr R I love this one.. Thank you for your comment on my write.. really appreciate your input - regards Wilma
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Date: 5/11/2010 4:52:00 PM
Great love write...Is this for the take my breath away? If so should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
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Date: 5/11/2010 12:53:00 PM
Your coments left on all my work, means a whole lot to me...Thank you! ....Jimmy
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:17:00 AM
So like a man not to remember...so many...yes but if each had been a tiny bit loved and perhaps those that were a tiny bit loved will be remembered. Those who served lust are not...often...I liked your more personal comment to me so why did what made me squirm make you laugh...I am just curious not upset. Light & love
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Date: 5/11/2010 7:13:00 AM
a beautiful write Dr. Ram Mehta :)
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Date: 5/11/2010 3:21:00 AM
Hum, Dr.Ram Mehta, this beautiful poem reminds me of a Psy. Phd that I once knew who also had a couch...and chairs and restaurants and words and loves...and maybe unidentified lies. Your words are well written and flow deeply. Many thoughts are retrieved by this poem. Sadly remembered. Interludes enjoyed by man and woman. God forgiven, perhaps. And hopefully, lost love doesn't haunt for a lifetime...giving pain. (I've said too much. Your words are beautiful and call upon one long ago.)
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Date: 5/10/2010 8:42:00 PM
An excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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Date: 5/10/2010 8:38:00 PM
INTENSE.. GOOD WRITE YOU HAVE HERE
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Date: 5/10/2010 1:39:00 PM
Love this well written piece here, really enjoyed it alot and thank you for wondrful comments on my poetry as well. Enjoy your day.:)
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Date: 5/9/2010 10:02:00 PM
Dr Ram, you have blossomed. This is better than good. I put it up there with the best. Thank you for writing it. Regards, Charles
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Date: 5/9/2010 10:35:00 AM
I love this one! This is one of my very favorites of yours. A fav for this! LUv, andrea
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Date: 5/9/2010 8:04:00 AM
Emotional and tender write Dr. Ram.. beautiful expressions in your lines.. so enjoyed your creative write... hope my comment on your blog helped u out with your soup mail..luv.. Linda-Marie..
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Date: 5/9/2010 4:01:00 AM
Nicely written Verse, Dr. Ram and very romantic! Thank you for your comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert
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Date: 5/9/2010 3:50:00 AM
The way this poem was written reminds of the poets of old. Nice write.
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Date: 5/9/2010 3:42:00 AM
Very Good!! great story told..
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