Nectar

On what breasts I have laid my head
And where and why I remember not.
On what waists have I laid my hands
Feeling the spring tide bosoms and
Lips were too near not to be missed
To get the feel of the rose petals.

Upon my couch I lay as lie the dead,
Many loves have come and gone
No images return on this stormy night,
The wind sings in my foliage,
The rain taps & sighs on the windowsills.
I have forgotten all of them but one.
In my heart there stirs a sweet pain
When I remember my sweet Nectar
On this day of Thirtieth September
When she came to me as virgin fresh
We made love till the early hours of the morn
Hearing the distant drums of a ritual dance.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Neels Avatar
May 18, 2010 at 1:33 AM
Dr R I love this one.. Thank you for your comment on my write.. really appreciate your input - regards Wilma
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May 11, 2010 at 4:52 PM
Great love write...Is this for the take my breath away? If so should do well in the contest..Keep the creative pen flowing..Sara
Anderson Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 12:53 PM
Your coments left on all my work, means a whole lot to me...Thank you! ....Jimmy
Guzzi Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 7:17 AM
So like a man not to remember...so many...yes but if each had been a tiny bit loved and perhaps those that were a tiny bit loved will be remembered. Those who served lust are not...often...I liked your more personal comment to me so why did what made me squirm make you laugh...I am just curious not upset. Light & love
Gumbo Avatar
May 11, 2010 at 7:13 AM
a beautiful write Dr. Ram Mehta :)
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May 11, 2010 at 3:21 AM
Hum, Dr.Ram Mehta, this beautiful poem reminds me of a Psy. Phd that I once knew who also had a couch...and chairs and restaurants and words and loves...and maybe unidentified lies. Your words are well written and flow deeply. Many thoughts are retrieved by this poem. Sadly remembered. Interludes enjoyed by man and woman. God forgiven, perhaps. And hopefully, lost love doesn't haunt for a lifetime...giving pain. (I've said too much. Your words are beautiful and call upon one long ago.)
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May 10, 2010 at 8:42 PM
An excellent write. God Bless Phyl
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May 10, 2010 at 8:38 PM
INTENSE.. GOOD WRITE YOU HAVE HERE
Burton Avatar
May 10, 2010 at 1:39 PM
Love this well written piece here, really enjoyed it alot and thank you for wondrful comments on my poetry as well. Enjoy your day.:)
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May 9, 2010 at 10:02 PM
Dr Ram, you have blossomed. This is better than good. I put it up there with the best. Thank you for writing it. Regards, Charles
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May 9, 2010 at 10:35 AM
I love this one! This is one of my very favorites of yours. A fav for this! LUv, andrea
Sweetheart Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 8:04 AM
Emotional and tender write Dr. Ram.. beautiful expressions in your lines.. so enjoyed your creative write... hope my comment on your blog helped u out with your soup mail..luv.. Linda-Marie..
Knop Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 4:01 AM
Nicely written Verse, Dr. Ram and very romantic! Thank you for your comments and have a nice Sunday...Gert
Nutter Avatar
May 9, 2010 at 3:50 AM
The way this poem was written reminds of the poets of old. Nice write.
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May 9, 2010 at 3:42 AM
Very Good!! great story told..
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