Dr.Ram Mehta Poet Limerick

Necklace-Less

In a Mall, Ninjas looked for necklaces
Suddenly predators attacked wreckless
There followed grim fight
Both used their utmost might
Sharpened swords making both of them neck-less



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Syllable count 10/10/6/6/10  (Followed is three syllabic according to PS Counter)

Eight Place win in:
Dr.Ram Mehta

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Carol Sunshine Brown November 17, 2011 at 5:23 AM Congratulations on your win with your "Ninja Limerick" poem Dr. Ram. Love, Carol

Andrea Dietrich November 12, 2011 at 12:39 AM oooh, I love that play on words with neck-less.good thinking! Congrats on your win.

Linda-Marie Sweetheart November 11, 2011 at 8:56 PM Congrats Dr. Ram on a super win for this wonderful Limerick so very creative my friend..luv..

Bob Quigley November 11, 2011 at 8:30 AM A very clever play on words Dr Ram. Congratulations on your win

Poet Destroyer A November 11, 2011 at 12:57 AM DR RAM~;-) CONGRATULATIONS, for your super ninja entry. Thank you for supporting my Sneaky Ninja contest* Have a wonderful VETERANS DAY @;- GOD BLESS,..p.d.

Joe Maverick November 10, 2011 at 7:46 PM Well i suppose you could say this is another angle on "necking" Dr Ram, hovever just can't see it becoming as attractive as its predecessor..! HA HA also hope it gets a win in the contest..

Carolyn Devonshire November 9, 2011 at 2:08 PM Oooh, that's a frightening thought. Enjoyed the humor, Dr. Ram. Best wishes in PD's Ninja contest! Love, Carolyn

Lisa Cooper November 9, 2011 at 8:49 AM lol great limerick

Stephen Parker November 9, 2011 at 8:26 AM I am glad that they only brandished words, and not the traditional accoutrements of neck lacing! A spiffy diddy! Enjoyed your tickling tirade!

Lori Lucas Mcclure November 9, 2011 at 6:36 AM intrigue in the mall! Great write! enjoyed reading your poem!---Lorii

Suzanne C. Goudreau November 9, 2011 at 6:01 AM A moving and very captivating read! You did marvels with your thoughts and pen! Thank you for sharing And May God Bless!