Necklace of Pearls

Teetering on a fine line
stretching across the western horizon,
suspended fire, glowing orange-red ball,
slowly receding, slipping downward
until, just out of sight,
split into a thousand shades and tints
like fine lead crystal, broken,
pastel fragments scattered on the clouds,
a pearl necklace encircling
the sky’s bare neckline
before evening’s black velvet cloak
encircles her shoulders.

Copyright, August 13, 2016
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Allison Avatar
August 19, 2016 at 3:22 AM
This was one of my faves Faye:-) congrats on your win:-) hugs Jan xx
Nusker Avatar
August 17, 2016 at 11:59 PM
Wow such a beautiful description. It was a pleasure reading it. Congrats on your win.
Merryman Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 3:24 PM
Beautiful and creative imagery! An excellent write, Faye!
Allison Avatar
August 14, 2016 at 3:16 PM
Outstanding imagery Faye - the final few lines took my breath away!:-) hugs Jan xx 7 and into faves:-) hugs Jan xx
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