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nebulous nexus hiku

blazing russet  l  e  a
                           v e 
                              s 
s w i r l against petrichor 
                               streets ~ 
       nebulous n e x u s

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Duke Beaufort

April 27, 2025 at 9:00 AM

IE, There must be a wind of some kind or perhaps it's a spirit of some kind making the leaves swirl. "Nebulous" certainly makes me wonder. Sounds like you're watching things unfold and letting your imagination get stirred as well. You appear to do this with ease. In any case, I do hope you are well. Smiles felt and sent!

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 2:30 AM

Thank you so much i read all your comments dear duke and im gratedul that you took time to grasp little details in my poems, you are very generous and kind' always thankful

Paul Bell

April 27, 2025 at 5:45 AM

The sweet smell of nature, and the sun is peeking through the clouds here. Makes you want to take a layer of clothes off and go mad.

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 2:38 AM

I always find it interesting how my british friends get excited when they see the sun. You sound like one too, enjoy your weather! Appreciate your visit

Valsa George

April 27, 2025 at 2:55 AM

I see the Empress stamp here too. Congratulations on your top win.

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 2:38 AM

Awwn thank you dear sweet valsa

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2025 at 9:03 PM

I see it scored big. Congrats, Ink

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 2:46 AM

Thank you sweet andrea! Appreciate you always

Andrea Dietrich

April 26, 2025 at 9:00 PM

Oh wow. Was this for Brian? Fantastic!

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 2:55 AM

Awwn thank you sweet Andrea i love your hikus always

Paige Hind

April 26, 2025 at 4:57 PM

Amazing image, took my breath away - a fav

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 3:29 AM

Awwn thats so sweet dear paige! Thank you also for the fave! Grateful for your support always

Hilda Greenhough

April 26, 2025 at 3:02 PM

I like your haiku. Many types of streets come to mind. My mind asks where, but knowing would ruin the mystery.

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 3:36 AM

Thank you so much, always good to hear from you dear hilda! Hope you are well! Sending you light

Sotto Poet

April 26, 2025 at 2:27 PM

I haven't written a Haiku in years, but yours is exquisitely made, with rich metaphors and profound implications. Best wishes for the contest!

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 3:36 AM

I wouldnt have thought that, i remember your haikus, maybe its time to write some dr sotto

Lin Lane

April 26, 2025 at 1:50 PM

A Haiku shape transitions the form. Your words need no explaining. ;-)

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 3:57 AM

Ah thank you so much; i know you write haiku very well and it is an honor to always receive your encouraging comments. Grateful

Sara Kendrick

April 26, 2025 at 12:55 PM

Descriptive and creative layout.Fall in its beauty, rain in its refreshing scent make good items for a few lines of fine poetry. Sara K

Ink Empress

April 28, 2025 at 3:58 AM

Thank you so much dear sara! Hope you are doing well. Appreciate your support always

Lioness Onpaper

April 26, 2025 at 6:21 AM

Oh wow papi!!russet leaves are such a vibe .. love this gorgeous haiku…. The piece is a dream!!

Ink Empress

April 26, 2025 at 6:32 AM

Papi! Lol finally i see you! Thank you!

Robert James Liguori

April 26, 2025 at 6:17 AM

Best haiku ever!!!! Enjoyed reading.

Ink Empress

April 26, 2025 at 6:32 AM

Thank you dear robert, hope to read one from you too, appreciate your support

The Aura Rhymes

April 26, 2025 at 5:54 AM

Interesting ! Haven’t read a haiku in a while

Ink Empress

April 26, 2025 at 5:55 AM

Hahaha interesting omg you are cute twinszy! Post a hiku

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