Nebulous Enigma

In testament to the sublime
The lily of the valley
Blooms aggressively with vigor
And simplicity in my alley.

The effusive, exquisite lilac
In a kaleidoscope of delight
Is the empress of my universe.
She’s a fantastical sight. 

Then a ravenous, incognito slug
Invadeds my moist oasis
Planning to live in impervious bliss
In desalinated places. 

Salt is a slug repellant
So I get out the shaker
And in a most splenetic rage
I send him to his maker.

A gelid, glacier-like winter
In ricochet across the way
Has tainted plants I though impervious
A mass of them died yesterday.

Now a zephyr breeze is blowing
And spring aster is in bloom
In an ecstasy of unity
In my excessive garden room.

A mass of tiny snowbells
Raise faces to celestial sky.
Ironic is their brave survival
When so many exquisites die.

With confidence, I garden
And with hubris I will admit.
As long as I have a place to dwell
At no time will I quit.

By: Joyce Johnson for PD's Secret contest

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011



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Date: 5/23/2012 7:12:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Joyce. Outstanding. Great job. Nice going, my friend. hugs, Ralph
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Date: 5/23/2012 3:59:00 PM
Enjoyed reading your creative work..I am glad that you mentioned the salt on the slug..I was having a problem with them getting on my cats food over night..I put a ring of salt on the ground around the plate and took care of those nasty little critters..Congrats on your win.Sara
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Date: 5/23/2012 6:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your placement in P.D.'s "SHHHH" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 5/23/2012 2:46:00 AM
Congrats on two things..... your win in this contest and you being one of the poets that are participating in the poetry festival at cyprus...saw your name so I said I should congratulate you on that
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Date: 5/22/2012 9:23:00 PM
Joyce. Congratulations,, for your awesome entry in my shh!! ~ contest...thank you for supporting my contest. Have yourself a wonderful and enyable day, :-) PD
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Date: 5/22/2012 2:12:00 PM
Jiyce congrats on your win..David
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Date: 10/24/2011 8:11:00 AM
Congratulations on your win in Dr. Ram's "Balassi Stanza" contest Joyce. Love, Carol
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Date: 10/23/2011 8:54:00 AM
Congrats Joyce on HM with this exceptional entry my friend.. enjoy special honor for excellent poetry luv..
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Date: 10/23/2011 5:44:00 AM
Lovely verse Joyce, congrats on a worthy poem presentation. Agape, Moses
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Date: 10/23/2011 3:51:00 AM
Congratulations on the win in my contest, Joyce
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