Neath Azure Blue Sky

For a while each day I drift away to a place inside my head The sun shines down on a sea so blue For my darling I am there with you And as we stroll along the sand two lovers forever hand in hand You and I neath azure blue sky Waves gently dancing ~ White horses prancing As slowly on her crests she takes us to the legendary, mystical Isle of Atlantis To where our spirits are ~ both you and I in Shangri-La... Written 28th March 2020 Contest A Cheerful Rhyme Sponsor Line Gauthier N/A Contest Strand Pick 3 Sponsor Brian Strand 1st Place Contest Who Am I Sponsor Unseeking Seeker
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Date: 4/7/2020 11:46:00 PM
Anne, such a lovely, romantic picture filled with such peacefulness and warmth. Congratulations on your top first place win!
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/8/2020 2:54:00 AM
Thank you dear Sam for your welcome comments. Keep safe - keep well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/30/2020 5:55:00 PM
Greetings Ann! A lovely poem which I hope wins first place. Many of us get sucked into the vortex of unhappy news. Time to unplug from the source, "tough times never last but tough people do". Churchill was so right.."we have nothing to fear but fear itself" Rainbow wishes! Panagiota xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/1/2020 12:24:00 AM
Thank you sweet friend you always lift me with your inspiring words. Glad you liked my poem Panagiota. Keep safe and well the both of you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/30/2020 12:26:00 PM
I love where to say, "For a while each day I drift away To a place inside my head." That is one way to make the time/day pass by. Dreamers can come up with new ideas. I love the sand/beach. Wish I was there now. Have a wonderful day........
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 4/1/2020 12:27:00 AM
Thank you so much Paula, yes I have always been a dreamer, escaping into my own world and poetry is my ultimate escape. Thanks for your visit and keep safe and well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/28/2020 8:14:00 AM
you certainly made me feel uplifted Ann, such trying times in the world and you transported me to a beautiful place. we are still managing to have long walks and son got back from London but is keeping his distance. keep smiling Ann:-) hugs Jan xx
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2020 4:21:00 AM
So glad my words uplifted you dear Jan. We are in lock down here and really missing my strolls, but thankfully we are keeping safe and well in this surreal time. Take good care both of you and I am pleased that your son has returned to you. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/28/2020 7:05:00 AM
A nice pen indeed Ann, been missing you but understand as I had lack of muse a month ago but seems to have returned. Hope you're well and safe in these troubled times, indeed not easy to keep positive but we remember the Lord is in control no matter how it may look. Look up this verse, Isaiah 26: 20, it's so apt for our present times. Blessings always, Gordon
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Ann Gilmour
Date: 3/30/2020 4:16:00 AM
Thanks Gordon for your lovely comments and I hope you are both ok and keeping safe dear friends. I am not going out at all now as I feel if we all adhere to the advice then hopefully things will eventually get back to normal, although I really miss my strolls along the prom, I can still see the sea from my balconies, so I am very lucky. Thanks for your support Gordon. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
Date: 3/28/2020 6:11:00 AM
Lovely poem Ann--enjoyed the happy tone.
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Date: 3/29/2020 2:52:00 AM
Thank you Vijay it is good to be back after a while, when my muse went awol! Lovely to see you and I pray you are keeping well. With kindest thoughts Ann xx
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