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a neat freak is compulsive
excessive and obsessed
their day revolves around cleaning

a neat freak has a one-track mind
and will not budge their focus
their one true friend is bleach

a neat freak disinfects all day
intolerant to imperfection
time and effort never a problem

a neat freak will not rest 
till every thing's in order
and every surface shines

let's not mince words
a neat freak is maniacal
and a neat freak i am not

Copyright © | Year Posted 2024




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Date: 7/26/2024 10:08:00 PM
sure there is someone near you dear poet, a pleasant poem this is, 'one true friend is bleach'! I love that thought. happy writing.
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 10:42:00 AM
lol ~ thanks for your visit and comment ~
Date: 7/26/2024 7:10:00 PM
There is a balance to things..to clean or not to clean, I think Shakespeare said ;)
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 10:43:00 AM
Yes, that is exactly what Shakespeare said ~ lol
Date: 7/26/2024 4:59:00 PM
oh heck I'm like my mum and am not a neat freak but my (ex) sister was obsessed with housework lol:-) hugs jan xx
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Line Gauthier
Date: 9/15/2024 10:43:00 AM
Ah ~ there's one in every family ~ or not

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