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Nearing Extinction

chronology
       arrow
  stream
            meandering
         within 
     sizeableness
  transient
 idiomata&
        tick squire

how many 
       panjandrum?
          mushroomed
              profusions 
                  blemished?
                    & maybe
adjudication 
      dichotomizes
          duration
                dealing with
                     divergent 
macrocosm
     meditatively
          mysteriousness
                  make whoopee
                          moments
                                 melt away

Written: August 10, 2022

A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Bill Baker August 17, 2022 at 5:03 PM Very creative and intriging, Lasaad. The picture was a great match for the form of poetry. Interrputations will have great variances. Good Luck my friend. Bill

Valsa George August 15, 2022 at 10:04 PM A very innovative way of writing which perhaps is above the level of ordinary poets. How I wish I could connect this to a meaningful whole . I am sure you will delight Brian for rising upto his expectations !

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2022 at 12:56 PM The picture was so interesting

Andrea Dietrich August 11, 2022 at 12:56 PM sure is a different way to write!! Probably not for me, but I hope you do well with Brian.

Victor Buhagiar August 11, 2022 at 12:53 AM You are getting to be an expert on this form.

Connie Marcum Wong August 10, 2022 at 8:00 PM I am not sure I understood all of this my friend, but I hope Brian does and gives you a win. Blessings xxoo