Nearing Extinction

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chronology
       arrow
  stream
            meandering
         within 
     sizeableness
  transient
 idiomata&
        tick squire

how many 
       panjandrum?
          mushroomed
              profusions 
                  blemished?
                    & maybe
adjudication 
      dichotomizes
          duration
                dealing with
                     divergent 
macrocosm
     meditatively
          mysteriousness
                  make whoopee
                          moments
                                 melt away

Written: August 10, 2022

A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest
Sponsored by: Brian Strand

NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE   using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2022 5:03:00 PM

Very creative and intriging, Lasaad. The picture was a great match for the form of poetry. Interrputations will have great variances. Good Luck my friend. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2022 10:04:00 PM

A very innovative way of writing which perhaps is above the level of ordinary poets. How I wish I could connect this to a meaningful whole . I am sure you will delight Brian for rising upto his expectations !