Nearing Extinction

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chronology arrow stream meandering within sizeableness transient idiomata& tick squire how many panjandrum? mushroomed profusions blemished? & maybe adjudication dichotomizes duration dealing with divergent macrocosm meditatively mysteriousness make whoopee moments melt away Written: August 10, 2022 A Brian Strand Premiere Choice Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Brian Strand NOTE:THIS IS AN OPEN(organic) FORM VERSE using spaces&breaks without grammatical symbols ,the ' open' relies upon 'the one breath limitation' & so inherently requires the 'reader' (reciter) to input and responds thus making this enigmatic form a two way interplay & interpretatIon unique to the moment& changing according to mood is inherently variable.

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Bill Baker

Date: 8/17/2022 5:03:00 PM

Very creative and intriging, Lasaad. The picture was a great match for the form of poetry. Interrputations will have great variances. Good Luck my friend. Bill

Valsa George

Date: 8/15/2022 10:04:00 PM

A very innovative way of writing which perhaps is above the level of ordinary poets. How I wish I could connect this to a meaningful whole . I am sure you will delight Brian for rising upto his expectations !