Rizwana Bhurani Poet Dodoitsu

Nearby Sounds

NEARBY SOUNDS.


Sound waves reach eardrum that is,
a cocktail of cooler,phone,
mixer,kids play,cats meow,
nightingale's koo hoo.



Dodoitsu form is a 26 syllable poem of 4 lines of 7,7,7,5 respectively.

CONTEST:Sounds of the day.
SPONSOR:Nayda Ivette Negron.
16/07/2016.

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Rizwana Bhurani June 22, 2016 at 6:25 PM Thanks for your kind words.....regards

Joanna Daniel June 21, 2016 at 4:58 AM Congratulations on your wonderful win, Rizwana:) A short write that incorporated many different sounds:)

Kai Michael Neumann June 21, 2016 at 3:22 AM Congratulations. Rizwana Bhurani June 22, 2016 at 6:25 PM Thanks.....regards

Rizwana Bhurani June 21, 2016 at 1:56 AM Thanks.....Regards

Kim Rodrigues June 20, 2016 at 10:49 PM Lovely! Congratulations!

Andrea Dietrich June 20, 2016 at 3:27 PM sweet write. Congrats, Rizwana. Rizwana Bhurani June 21, 2016 at 1:57 AM thanks,.....regards

Nayda Ivette Negron Flores June 20, 2016 at 2:44 PM Congratulations on the placement of the contest Rizwana. Rizwana Bhurani June 21, 2016 at 1:59 AM Thanks a lot for your kind consideration....my pleasure to be a part of this contest.....regards

Sandra Haight June 20, 2016 at 12:53 PM So many sounds in so few words in your nicely written Dodoitsu, Rizwana! Congratulations on your podium win! Hugs, Sandra Rizwana Bhurani June 21, 2016 at 2:00 AM Thanks for your rich sounding words....regards

John Lawless June 20, 2016 at 12:50 PM Congrats on your placement Rizwana Rizwana Bhurani June 21, 2016 at 2:01 AM Thanks....regards

Rizwana Bhurani June 17, 2016 at 7:37 PM Thanks......best wishes