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Near Fall

Reading some homework
The day seems like artwork
Has the sky ever been so blue

Three guys toss a frisbee
perilously near me
shirtless boys silhouetted in turquoise

We’ve got our shades on
We pretend not to watch em’
But we know they’re putting on a show.

We’ve got fold up recliners
and we set a timer
to move to the shade in a minute or two

But the sun seems distracted
cooler and less radioactive
dozens of students are out on the quad

The trees aren’t just standing
the breeze has them dancing
to ‘Blood in the Cut’, a song by ‘K.Flay’

On this cool, near-fall holiday
We’ll while our day away
each of us claiming a chance to relax

Now that we’re juniors, we know the facts
We get that there’s still a lot of reading to do
but we know, we can have a little fun too.
What else would you expect us to do?
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Bowring Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:00 PM
Hello Anais (lovely name) I really enjoyed reading your poem. It was a fun read and great writing. Reminds me of the lyric ’Girls just wanna have fun!’ too like Tom says. I love the last line. Thank you for sharing.
Vionet Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:24 PM
Thanks Christina
Rolland Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 5:21 PM
lovely penning, we have to enjoy vacation, until last minute, i guess thanks for sharing
Vionet Avatar
September 11, 2023 at 2:24 PM
yes!
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 2:34 PM
Na-na-na-na-na-na, I like what’s playing on the speaker Anais, But the sun seems distracted, cooler and less radioactive I like that line too, so what else would I expect yous to do, play more of the same of course, sounds like a great day, nicely written and fresh, cheers David
Kavanagh  Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 10:14 PM
Yes explicit version of course, it’s powerful stuff, I also listen to Taylor Momsen‘s, (pretty reckless), in fact any music that packs a punch!
Vionet Avatar
September 3, 2023 at 4:01 PM
Thanks! Have you heard ‘Blood in the Cut’, a song by ‘K.Flay’??
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