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A dabchick is a bit like a surfboard It has a hollow hull sandwiched together with a centre board, tiller and two sails One leans out perpendicular to counter balance  the tipping hull placing feet under the strap that runs each side of the hull.

Back when I was twelve, my dad built me a dabchick
I had great fun learning how to sail it getting many dunking's
Us kids used to sail around the harbour and race to the spit.

One day after racing back and forth several times,
the wind started to pick up and the others headed ashore.
But I carried on, this  was way too fun as I sped about.

The squall grew stronger and I turned turtle several times
up righting my boat I foolishly carried on until as I up ended her
I was hit on the head, dazed I sat on the up turned hull.

Unable in the squall's strength to get her up right
I clung to the centre board and watched the harbour wall get closer
too dazed to realise the danger I was in I just sat there waiting.

Lucky for me the yacht club notified the life boat and it came out,
rescued in the nick of time they took me aboard and dried me off.  
They towed my dabchick still turned turtle back to the yacht club.

My parents Dad especially were furious and I was grounded for
the rest of the summer while dad repaired my dabchick.
My humiliation was complete when the local paper covered my rescue.

I learnt that day to respect the sea and treat it with caution.
My story could have ended so differently. Yet I remained a dare devil
and went through two very bad car clashes with barely a scratch.

Now at last much wiser I take things much more steadily
and rarely take such risks after all I am not invincible.
Just someone who pushed her luck right to the edge.

written 11/02/2014

contest: Near Death or Near Life Experience 

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/2/2014 11:54:00 PM
Great take on this challenge Shadow. Good Luck with this contest.
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Date: 11/2/2014 5:33:00 AM
Wonderful that you survived so that we could hear the rest of the story..Reads like winning material to me..Way to go...You are a brave person to attempt such daring feats..Sara
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Date: 11/2/2014 2:33:00 PM
as a child one does not fear much Sara I must say I have always lived life right on the edge after all we only live once (or do we? Jury's out for me) ty for reading hugs