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I know you left me, But you're still around, How can it be, When you're in the ground. I loved you more than anyone, And you I really miss, The time we had is done, It ended without a kiss. Once I thought I felt you touch, Your cold hand on my face, The warmth is what I miss so much, I wish you weren't in that place. I couldn't feel you anymore, Since that first night, You were standing in the door, But something wasn't right. I already knew I lost you, Though you were right in front of me, There was nothing I could do, What happened was meant to be. You will always be in my heart, Your memory will always remain, They can never tear that apart, One day we will be together again. September, 4th, 2013

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Date: 7/28/2014 4:17:00 PM
Oh I can feel the ghost by my side as I read this, what an emotional write. Hugs
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 8/1/2014 1:25:00 AM
Sometimes, the ghosts of our past are a lot closer than we think!.... Thank you for the kind comments, Casarah. Hugs :)
Date: 6/1/2014 10:43:00 PM
Congrats Kelly on the fine win!!!!!
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 6/3/2014 2:20:00 AM
Thank you for the kind congrats, Robert!
Date: 5/27/2014 2:13:00 AM
many congrat's on your win with this fine poem, Kelly Lainie
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Kelly Deschler
Date: 5/27/2014 10:39:00 PM
Thank you for the kind congrats, Lainie. I appreciate it very much!
Date: 5/26/2014 9:57:00 PM
KELLY,, Congratulations, thank you for the support. Enjoy my blog "Four Letter Words." if you like or have the time.. ((THIS IS A SWEET POEM ON LOVE)) Good night.... XOX~ LINDA
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Date: 11/22/2013 4:27:00 PM
Kelly This tugs at the readers heartstrings and emotions. Words of sadness and loss. You captured the feelings of losing someone perfectly. Nice job Thanks for the awesome comment on my Attraction poem
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Date: 9/6/2013 12:29:00 PM
Made Me Think Of The Movie, 'Ghost,' Sweet Beautiful Kelly ~ I Can Still See Marilyn Standing Upon The Back Lot While Filming, 'Bus Stop,' Amid A Niche Wearing Her Gypsy Dress And Smiling; Precious Baby Girl ~ I Like Your Somewhat Haunting Verse As Also It's Visionary In Love's Happy Ending; Where Would A Heart Be Without Such As This, `HIS,` Everlasting Kiss *.* ~ ( * Thank You For Your Kind Warm Visit, Love, John
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Date: 9/6/2013 12:16:00 PM
AH THAT IS SWEET AND VERY BEAUTIFUL
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Date: 9/5/2013 4:44:00 PM
Hello, Kelly your poem has a sadness. I feel for you and your loss. it's hard to face a world, when things are not left the right way... you will be together at the end.. your heart knows it . ~SKAT~
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Date: 9/5/2013 4:18:00 PM
Kelly, it is a heartfelt poem.. This reminds me a song.. from Katy Perry. (the one that got away) it's a sad song about her boyfriend passing... and he's always in her heart... in another life time.. ..i believe they are waiting... I thought of writing a poem like this.. thanks for the kind comment... adding this one to my favorite poems.. I hope it's only a poem.. enjoyed it... Linda
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Date: 9/4/2013 8:42:00 PM
HI Kelly, A heartfelt write which one can sense the sadness and loss by the author.. Ken
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