Near-Death Experience

NEAR-DEATH EXPERIENCE

Imagine open heart surgery,
imagine no blood used.
Triple bypass, just beginning,
blood later … still refused.

Previous surgeries had several,
but this one was near death.
One day ok, then shocking news,
that took away … my breath.

Doctor, ok’d no blood surgery,
came through as Doc did plan.
Just out of intensive care, ask,
“Why, black grains … in bedpan?

Internal bleeding from ulcers,
wow, surprise must survive.
Six weeks rehab, then ambulance
called ... cause felt half alive!

Had pneumonia, multi blood clots,
not in one lung, but two!
As if this wasn’t enough, next
soon feel pain … never knew.

The most barbaric procedure,
knife stabbed side, tube inserted.
No time to numb, knife’s entry site,
stabbing … felt so perverted.

October entered hospital,
December, finally home.
Months recovering, through all this,
God never left me ... alone.

That year, flew to San Antonio 
for art classes, did pack.
At airport to return, had heart
and gall-bladder … attack.

Hospital was a no-blood site,
two surgeries all alone.
Survived near-death experiences,
now well … “quarantined at home!”

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Date: 10/31/2022 5:47:00 PM
Was this written after all your problems? Hope your doing better. I was reading through some of your writes and ran into “Widower” is a poem somewhere. I could not find one.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/2/2022 7:33:00 PM
Patrick, Thank you for commenting, not only for support, but I never thanked the poets who commented earlier as I didn't know anyone had read this till got notice you did. IK am doing fine now, thanks for asking.
Date: 5/7/2022 4:21:00 PM
Glad you survived Barbara.The hits just kept on coming,but you rolled with them and came out the other side,faith intact. Hope you are fit as a fiddle now.
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/2/2022 7:38:00 PM
Vickey, sorry for late thank you. Faith still intact, and I and the Doctors obeyed God's stand on blood. Thank you again for visiting and hope you will return now and then. Gonna go visit you.
Date: 4/30/2022 10:50:00 AM
Time to move to a nation with a National Health scheme! Aloha!
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/2/2022 7:40:00 PM
Rico, thanks for visiting. My insurance did ok, for this grateful.
Date: 4/29/2022 11:27:00 PM
Oh my Barbara, what a harrowing experience for you. After all that and now you are stuck inside. I feel for you. I hope things get better soon. Blessings xxoo
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/2/2022 7:39:00 PM
Sorry never knew she had commented. She supported me since I joined PS. I will miss her kindness and support!
Date: 4/29/2022 11:16:00 PM
Oh my goodness! I'm so glad you made it through all that, God obviously still has a purpose for your life here on this sphere, and your poem is one of them <3 What a beautiful testimony, ' God never left me ... alone.' God blessed you, and you have truly blessed me through your words <3 Stay well! ~BJ
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Barbara Barry-Nishanian
Date: 11/2/2022 7:44:00 PM
BJ, Thanks for your appreciation of my faith and my poem. My purpose today is, I teach (FREE) the Bible. Not way usually taught. Teach by subject... this way get to know the mind and thoughts of God. Ever interested, done over the phone Thanks
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