Navigating Through Life

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Your journey
        though life begins
            with your
                very first breath.

Exploring your world
        hand to mouth,
            you test
                boundaries.

Skirting
        obstacles
            encountered,
                you look for detours.

There are guideposts,
        but
            free will; chooses your path.

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Edward Ibeh

Date: 2/1/2023 3:57:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this excellently composed Yalto, Emile:-) Bravo!

Emile Pinet
Date: 2/1/2023 8:51:00 AM

Thanks, Edward, I appreciate the placement, my friend, Emile.