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she pierced the luscious skin with a deep plunge of her thumb sunk her teeth into its juicy pulp she felt the joy of biting in the sun AP: Honorable Mention 2021 Submitted on February 21, 2021 for contest ALL YOURS (FEB 23) sponsored by BRIAN STRAND Originally posted on February 21, 2019

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Date: 2/22/2019 5:46:00 PM
Simple everyday things that make up the varied tapestry of life. The senses that derive so much pleasure from the commonplace, habitual occurrences of daily life. Sometimes we forget these things. Well written.
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Date: 2/22/2019 6:32:00 PM
Thank you for your lovely visit and comment, WA.
Date: 2/21/2019 9:59:00 PM
This one reminds me of when I was young I picked oranges for money to buy a bike, Fresh ones right off the tree nothing better then that, excellent Line!!
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:10:00 PM
I bet! Thanks for your visit and comment, Bobby.
Date: 2/21/2019 9:40:00 PM
Fresh orange right of the tree, yummmmmmmmmm. Hugs Eve
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Date: 2/21/2019 10:10:00 PM
Thanks, Eve.

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