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Naughty Spots

“Open wide”, said he, “wanna see what you've got Settle down, I'm your dentist, wanna see your chops Your mind's in the gutter” Then he started to stutter Began to squim as she nibbled his naughty spots © Jack Ellison 2015

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Date: 7/22/2015 11:59:00 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 3:49:00 PM
What a silly man I am, eh!!! LOL Thanks for the 7 my friend!!!
Date: 7/22/2015 3:41:00 AM
Whoa! That one took a turn didn't it! Always love reading your page because its filled with surprises. XD Always, Laura
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/22/2015 7:37:00 AM
WHOA indeed! My alter ego wrote this one... really! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 7/20/2015 11:25:00 AM
ha ha ha love your humour Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 11:54:00 AM
You and me... The "Naughty" King and Queen of the Soup! YEEHAW Love, Jack xxx
Date: 7/20/2015 10:50:00 AM
Here... John... Here... John... The only thing that could make this better... is a response from John! Here... John... PS. You REALLY are getting being naughty today...
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 11:03:00 AM
It's all John's fault! I absolve myself of any blame! Johnny made me do it!!! Love, Jack xxx
Date: 7/20/2015 9:55:00 AM
Well anyone who can say open wide as they lean over you has a job to be envied..lol
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Jack Ellison
Date: 7/20/2015 10:21:00 AM
LOL!!!! You sure have that right!!!! Love, Jack xxx