Naughty Spots

“Open wide”, said he, “wanna see what you've got Settle down, I'm your dentist, wanna see your chops Your mind's in the gutter” Then he started to stutter Began to squim as she nibbled his naughty spots © Jack Ellison 2015
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Makama Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 11:59 AM
this is an awesome piece. Its nice visiting your pages once again. Definitely a 7!
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:49 PM
What a silly man I am, eh!!! LOL Thanks for the 7 my friend!!!
Breidenthal Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 3:41 AM
Whoa! That one took a turn didn't it! Always love reading your page because its filled with surprises. XD Always, Laura
Ellison Avatar
July 22, 2015 at 7:37 AM
WHOA indeed! My alter ego wrote this one... really! Love, Jack xxx
Allison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:25 AM
ha ha ha love your humour Jack:-) hugs Jan xx
Ellison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:54 AM
You and me... The "Naughty" King and Queen of the Soup! YEEHAW Love, Jack xxx
Eastman Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 10:50 AM
Here... John... Here... John... The only thing that could make this better... is a response from John! Here... John... PS. You REALLY are getting being naughty today...
Ellison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 11:03 AM
It's all John's fault! I absolve myself of any blame! Johnny made me do it!!! Love, Jack xxx
Cervenka Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 9:55 AM
Well anyone who can say open wide as they lean over you has a job to be envied..lol
Ellison Avatar
July 20, 2015 at 10:21 AM
LOL!!!! You sure have that right!!!! Love, Jack xxx
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