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Naughty Or Nice

What if Santa snuck up on you? Leaned in and whispered, I ‘Gotcha’ Look at you, ducking and dodging All year round he has been watching Shorten that list sonny, to only a few! 16.12.2021 Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich Contest: I need a good laugh, X’MAS LIMERICK CONTEST.

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Paula Goldsmith

Date: 12/26/2021 2:24:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. A fun write. All year Santa has been watching us. A very busy guy. Have a Blessed day..................

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 12/24/2021 4:49:00 PM

Carol, I really really liked your limerick idea. If the 3rd and 4th lines had been shorter than lines 1, 2 and 5, it would have been awesome limerick form and this would for sure have scored higher. Really great humor. Congrats and merry Christmas . It's coming right around the corner.