Carol Mitra Poet Limerick

Naughty Or Nice

What if Santa snuck up on you?
Leaned in and whispered, I ‘Gotcha’
Look at you, ducking and dodging
All year round he has been watching 
Shorten that list sonny, to only a few!

16.12.2021
Sponsor: Andrea Dietrich
Contest: I need a good laugh,
X’MAS LIMERICK CONTEST.

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Paula Goldsmith December 26, 2021 at 2:24 PM Congratulations on your win. A fun write. All year Santa has been watching us. A very busy guy. Have a Blessed day..................

Andrea Dietrich December 24, 2021 at 4:49 PM Carol, I really really liked your limerick idea. If the 3rd and 4th lines had been shorter than lines 1, 2 and 5, it would have been awesome limerick form and this would for sure have scored higher. Really great humor. Congrats and merry Christmas . It's coming right around the corner.