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Naughty Doggie

A jiggling rush of energy Wags along our messed-up stair As Lullie huffs with a naughty glee, To cause mayhem beyond compare! My dachshund begs to play tag -game With flopping of ears , this just disarms; While dog’s trick to win is one big shame She guards me dear from any harm. Lullie sleeps often in my bed Her belly twirling all around; I wonder of mischief ahead Till fingers trace a rounder mound. Oh baby pups arrive, although Lullie's mate, that I'll never know! Shadow Hamilton's Pets ~ A true story ~ 11/28/2014>

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Date: 12/4/2014 8:13:00 AM
How sweet! I can't let my dog have pups, I have learned I am unable to give them away and soon I am overrun.
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Date: 11/30/2014 1:19:00 PM
Cute naughty doggie poem Nette. What did the puppies look like? Congrats on your win, woof, woof - James :) :)
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Date: 11/29/2014 11:55:00 PM
I am happy this bubbling one did well,congrats on the win Nette...huggs
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Date: 11/29/2014 10:45:00 PM
Whimsical write Nette..Well done!
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Date: 11/29/2014 12:54:00 PM
Ah, so sweet Regina. I love Dachshund. Congratulations on your win.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/29/2014 12:59:00 PM
Sorry Nette
Date: 11/29/2014 12:43:00 PM
Dropping back with my congrats Nette:-) Hugs Jan xx
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Date: 11/29/2014 8:16:00 AM
Congrats on ur winning awesome write Nette!
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Date: 11/29/2014 7:37:00 AM
a wonderful surprise Nette congrats on win and ty for your support hugs
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Date: 11/28/2014 7:14:00 PM
The fondness for a pet doesn't stop even when gets really naughty. Your last 2 lines hit the mark with flying A colors; brilliant poem from you, Nette
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Date: 11/28/2014 6:01:00 PM
So much love in this write....doggie might be naughty but you still love him...hugs Tim
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:31:00 PM
This should win the contest just for featuring a Dachshund, the best breed in the world. GL to you Nette.
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Date: 11/28/2014 5:17:00 PM
Great imagery Nette and the final couplet made me smile - naughty doggie indeed :-) Good luck in the contest:-) Hugs Jan
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