CayCay Godwin Poet Rhyme

Naughty Brother Bobby

Inspired by Real Life Brother Billy, My Halloween Candy Thief

Every year when it is sweet Halloween time,
my selfish big brother commits the same crime -
he quick gobbles his candy and then steals mine!
I can't tell cause my parents will say I whine
so, this Halloween my mean brother, Bobby,
will feel regret and correct his theft hobby. 
Tonight, this sis is a sinister zombie 
who will see Bro turn squatty, potty sorry!
I foil wrapped sweets he favs as delicious –
he will soon steal Exlax-styled Hershey kisses.
By the time naughty Bobby grows suspicious
his guts will have already turned most vicious!

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Charles Messina November 1, 2019 at 6:19 AM Now that's the way to get even (lol) Love this CayCay. Congrats on your placement ~Charlie

Gershon Wolf October 30, 2019 at 9:16 PM Gosh, how does a nice, thoughtful person like you dream up such a vicious revenge?! Ha, ha: Just perfect, CayCay… True confessions time: When I was 10, I used to actually do this kind of stuff to my sister, then hide out and wait for her to down my evil potions. But alas, she always foiled (!) my plans... btw, it was revenge for her 'always' blaming me in front of our Mom when something went wrong. (And Mom always believed her and gave it to poor old innocent me!). LOL. Those were the days! Smiles, gw

Sandra Adams October 30, 2019 at 8:44 PM back to say congratulations my friend... hugs :)

Alexis Y. October 30, 2019 at 3:10 PM Hi CayCay, Lol! That will teach him to get a new hobby for sure! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Anne-Lise Andresen October 30, 2019 at 9:46 AM - Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest - I enjoy reading your story, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May October 30, 2019 at 9:00 AM Congratulations on your placement

Andrea Dietrich October 27, 2019 at 12:16 PM this was GREAT, Caycay, I see you used his name in your poem. I hope he likes us doing that!!! I did it in one of his other contests. He seems to have a great sense of humor and he ought to love your poem!

Sandra Adams October 26, 2019 at 8:02 AM poor brother bobby....i wouldn't wish that on anyone... wickedly good fun i guess... enjoyed your creative write.... hugs :)

Constance La France October 25, 2019 at 11:35 AM CayCay oh you are a wicked zombie sister, I almost feel sorry for bro Bobby ! Well done !

Vijay Pandit October 25, 2019 at 11:24 AM So well written CayCay! Enjoyed the humor..expertly written. Best for a win.

Line Gauthier October 25, 2019 at 8:53 AM Good one, CayCay. He deserves it. LOL

Richard Lamoureux October 25, 2019 at 8:05 AM Now that’s going to get him moving. This is a clever one. Hugs Rick.

Regina Mcintosh October 25, 2019 at 7:02 AM That's hilarious... good way to get back at him. God bless you, dear friend. Gina