Naughty Brother Bobby

Every year when it is sweet Halloween time, my selfish big brother commits the same crime - he quick gobbles his candy and then steals mine! I can't tell cause my parents will say I whine so this Halloween my mean brother, Bobby, will feel regret and correct his theft hobby. Tonight, this sis is a sinister zombie who will see Bro turn squatty, potty sorry! I foil wrapped sweets he favs as delicious – he will soon steal Exlax-styled Hershey kisses. By the time naughty Bobby grows suspicious his guts will have already turned most vicious! ... CayCay October 25, 2019

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Charles Messina

Date: 11/1/2019 6:19:00 AM

Now that's the way to get even (lol) Love this CayCay. Congrats on your placement ~Charlie

Gershon Wolf

Date: 10/30/2019 9:16:00 PM

Gosh, how does a nice, thoughtful person like you dream up such a vicious revenge?! Ha, ha: Just perfect, CayCay… True confessions time: When I was 10, I used to actually do this kind of stuff to my sister, then hide out and wait for her to down my evil potions. But alas, she always foiled (!) my plans... btw, it was revenge for her 'always' blaming me in front of our Mom when something went wrong. (And Mom always believed her and gave it to poor old innocent me!). LOL. Those were the days! Smiles, gw

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/30/2019 8:44:00 PM

back to say congratulations my friend... hugs :)

Alexis Y.

Date: 10/30/2019 3:10:00 PM

Hi CayCay, Lol! That will teach him to get a new hobby for sure! Congratulations on your placement in the contest. Enjoy the rest of your day:-) Alexis

Sunshine Smile

Date: 10/30/2019 9:46:00 AM

- Congratulations on your wonderful poem, in this fun contest - I enjoy reading your story, CayCay :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Bobby May

Date: 10/30/2019 9:00:00 AM

Congratulations on your placement

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 10/27/2019 12:16:00 PM

this was GREAT, Caycay, I see you used his name in your poem. I hope he likes us doing that!!! I did it in one of his other contests. He seems to have a great sense of humor and he ought to love your poem!

Sandra Adams

Date: 10/26/2019 8:02:00 AM

poor brother bobby....i wouldn't wish that on anyone... wickedly good fun i guess... enjoyed your creative write.... hugs :)