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Nature's Waltz

Fall's palette clothes summer leaves with golden hues. Melodic breeze invites exquisitely frocked foliage to a waltz. Whirling and twirling, leaves dance in the air, gradually drifting down... down... down... carpeting the earth with beauty. 9/20/2011 for Brian Strand's "Fall, your choice" contest. 1st place! for PD's #1's contest

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Franci Hoffman

Date: 9/27/2020 8:13:00 AM

Lovely etheree, Kim, and congratulations on your win!

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/7/2012 6:27:00 AM

A belated congratulations on your win in P.D.'s contest Kim. Love, Carol

Bob Quigley

Date: 3/6/2012 8:27:00 AM

Very descriptive Kim. I can see this poem.

Rhonda Johnson-Saunders

Date: 3/5/2012 8:29:00 PM

Congrats on your win with this beautifully descriptive etheree! Blessings, Rhonda

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/5/2012 8:17:00 PM

congrats Kim on an eloquent write and win luv.. top notch poetry..

Ralph Taylor

Date: 3/5/2012 9:46:00 AM

Congrats, Kim. Excellent piece. Nice going. luv and hugs, Ralph

Sashi Prabhu

Date: 3/5/2012 7:44:00 AM

enchanting,picturesque waltz..............congrats.............~sashi

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/4/2012 7:05:00 PM

Kim,,, .congratulations! in my contest...muched enjoyed your entry,;-) always*PD

Nick Bagnall

Date: 9/26/2011 8:14:00 AM

Congratulations on the win, loved the poem, you've really captured the floating leaves well, was less keen on the broken lines just to fit the form, but still a very nice piece.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 9/25/2011 3:29:00 PM

Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's "Fall Your Choice" contest Kim. Love, Carol

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:10:00 PM

Thank you, Carol. Kim

Joyce Johnson

Date: 9/23/2011 11:57:00 PM

Lovely! Congratulations. Love, Joyce

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:10:00 PM

Thank you, Joyce. Kim

Don Johnson

Date: 9/23/2011 10:50:00 PM

musical waltz of the leaf that falls, tiny willy willy breeze, see the picture dance, enthrall, no Aussie tree has them to fall...

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:12:00 PM

Thanks for taking time to read my poem, Don. Like your little rhyme. Kim

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 9/23/2011 9:03:00 PM

Congratulations on this exquisite Etheree taking top honors. An awesome poem!

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:12:00 PM

Thank you Connie and thank you for taking the time to read my poem. Kim

Ralph Taylor

Date: 9/23/2011 7:07:00 PM

Congrats on 1st place, Kim. Excellent etheree. Nice going. xxxRalph

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:13:00 PM

Thank You Ralph and thank you for reading my poem. Kim

Debbie Guzzi

Date: 9/23/2011 5:04:00 PM

and the air smells so great too who new the earth goes from RIPE to ROT with such a sweet smell? congrad's on this fine win! light & love

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:14:00 PM

Thanks Debbie, and thank you for taking time to read my poetry. Kim

Bob Quigley

Date: 9/23/2011 11:52:00 AM

May I have this dance? Lovely imagery. Congratulations

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/25/2011 7:14:00 PM

Thank you, Bob and thank you for taking the time to read my poetry. Kim

Nette Onclaud

Date: 9/20/2011 4:02:00 PM

flawless and totally inviting, kerry.. a sure winner for me.. best of luck! :) huggs, nette

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/20/2011 9:47:00 PM

Thank you Nette and thank you also for taking the time to read my poems. Kim

Judy Ball

Date: 9/20/2011 12:52:00 PM

Very nicely done Kim. Good luck in the contest. God Bless, JB

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/20/2011 9:48:00 PM

Thank you, Judy. I appreciate your comments. Kim

Gwendolen Song

Date: 9/20/2011 12:36:00 PM

Lucky me! I am the first to preview this gorgeous autumn write of yours. This is the nicest imagery...the wind inviting the leaves to a waltz...Getting wrapped up in nature is such a blessed place to be. Brian will certainly do a twirl over this one!! Congrats on an awesome entry, Kim. Gwendolen

Kim Merryman
Date: 9/20/2011 9:50:00 PM

Thank you Gwendolen for your sweet comments. I'm glad you liked the poem. Kim