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Nature's Wake

. The morning's bright lit the once black in mine eyne The tips of mine digits on my hands and on mine feet pulled me like the rubber band in a mighty stretch mine thus yawned And after my wake nature had me reach for the you yesss you

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Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 1/11/2012 10:09:00 AM

darling James.. lovely as ever.. kust wanted u to know I managed to get a partner for the contest in question to u..but were my first choice.. maybe next time luv..

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 1/2/2012 3:36:00 PM

Nothing nicer than waking up with beautiful sunshine and even more wonderful is having someone to hug. Wishing you and Noah a very happy 2012. love phyl

Daver Austin

Date: 12/24/2011 2:44:00 PM

What is Sir James up to, I was just asking myself. So, I decided to find one of his poems and read it a few hundred times - such is his complex mind. This is not complex, James, just great. Merry Christmas. Love, daver

Laura Breidenthal

Date: 12/19/2011 9:07:00 PM

Ah, this poem was really nice to read! Hope all is well, James! Always, Laura

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 12/14/2011 10:39:00 AM

Many people wake up groggy and need a cup of coffee before they reach out for their loved one. How wonderful that the mere touch of the sun on your eyes makes you reach for her. Beautifully written, James. Love, Carolyn

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 12/14/2011 9:29:00 AM

Good morning James, i love the dilation in ones sight of awaking.. and reaching for warmth all over again sounds good.. great poem,..p.d.

James Peranteau
Date: 8/4/2023 9:40:00 PM

;) yesss, i'm editing...much love, james

Harry Horsman

Date: 12/14/2011 9:12:00 AM

Like this James, alot to read into here. harry

Elizabeth Wesley

Date: 12/13/2011 4:13:00 PM

Can't imagine who you were reaching for James but I hope she woke you up and made the day special! :)

M.I.A .

Date: 12/12/2011 9:55:00 PM

you sounded like an adorable cat that i'd like to pet all the time James. LoL (sorry if I use cat, maybe a guy would prefer dog..?). Btw, i hope you have the chance to read my poem 'Thank you and Sorry', that one was for you dear poet. my best holiday wishes JP!

Deb Wilson

Date: 12/11/2011 9:14:00 AM

liked the way you awoke! especially the mighty stretch! good poem...love,Deb