Nature's Treat

Two hundred blackbirds swarmed on the grass ~ Green Chocolate Chip Mint Ice-Cream

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 11/27/2023 8:59:00 AM

Okay..I think there might be a problem, but free fertilizer. Thanks for sharing this humorous one with us and for dropping by my POTD with congratulations. Sara K

Silent One

Date: 11/25/2023 2:48:00 AM

Nice great use of metaphor..

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 11/24/2023 12:13:00 PM

- Lovely ... all I could think of ... after reading : ... mint ice cream ... delicious ... - hugs

Charles Messina
Date: 11/24/2023 3:07:00 PM

Yum! Thank you, Anne-Lise :) Hugs

Sara Etgen-Baker

Date: 11/24/2023 11:21:00 AM

I love the comparison of black birds on the green grass to green chocolate chip mint ice cream! Outstanding, Charles. Have a splendid day, Sara