Jenish Somadas Poet Tanka

Nature's Teapot

Muddy waves, foam and the storm
All settled in my teapot
As nature stirring outside
My own spoon rustling inside
Will all settle in due time?



Honorable Mention in STRAND no 670,any form,any theme Poetry Contest sponsored by Brian Strand

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William Kelii Kekaula July 12, 2020 at 2:28 AM Wondrously witty, Jenish, visually expressive, my friend and compliments indeed for your honorable placement -- Aloha from Hawaii~@William Jenish Somadas July 12, 2020 at 4:30 AM Thank you William for your delightful words..

Anisha Dutta February 10, 2020 at 7:08 AM Incidentally I am going through your poem while sipping tea. Nice to read.Nice is the photo. Jenish Somadas February 10, 2020 at 7:30 AM lol.. It is best for reading with tea.. Thank you for your time and comment...

Jennifer Proxenos February 6, 2020 at 11:00 PM Hi Jenish, I love this write and incidentally I love this pic. Have faved this poem. I need one exactly the same for a project I am doing, (not for Poetry Soup), do you mind if I use it? Well penned my friend. Blessings, Jennifer. Jenish Somadas February 6, 2020 at 11:45 PM Thank you Jennifer for your comment and the fave.. Use it wherever you need..I'm honoured..

Darlene De Beaulieu February 6, 2020 at 6:09 PM Hello Jenish Somados, It looks like we are both having our cup of tea now. Enjoy! Have a nice evening my friend. Darlene De Beaulieu February 8, 2020 at 5:31 PM Hello Jenish Somades,oh-you did? that was me. Have a nice evening my friend. Jenish Somadas February 6, 2020 at 11:43 PM Thank you.. I heard the rattle of teacups..Have a great day..

Ann Foster February 6, 2020 at 8:45 AM This was so much fun. I love the way the clouds float around in my tea or coffee... making pictures... God Bless ... Ann Jenish Somadas February 6, 2020 at 11:28 PM Thank you Ann for your time and comment.. Let the storm in the teapot not trouble you much..

Maureen McGreavy Pigeon Tart February 6, 2020 at 7:25 AM Lovely piece. Enjoyed! Jenish Somadas February 6, 2020 at 7:35 AM Thank you Maureen..

Vijay Pandit February 6, 2020 at 7:03 AM Enjoy the nature's bliss outside--in comfort of home--sipping tea. Jenish Somadas February 6, 2020 at 7:12 AM Nature is stirring inside and outside.. Which storm will be more fierce.. Let time decide.. Thank you Vijay..