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Natures Perfection

With first breath, the wakeful light of dawn sings an adoration of morning prayer nature's eternal temperate sweet air, charmed ensemble of fluttering bird's wings. Pink, yellow, blue buds up-staring unbend Dance under breaking clouds that saunter by Lacing sunlight. Good-bye! Good-bye, so shy Blue dragonfly, ascend to heaven, friend. Under untrimmed budding magnolia shade toward blinding sleepy eye sun. To short the lease that directs your favor to court in undisturbed possession through the glade. Tortoise Beetle, with your gold complexion and the splendor of natures perfection. 8/8/2019 Poetry Contest: A Summer's Day Redo Sponsored by: Michelle Faulkner
temperate, buds, lease, possession, heaven, complexion, eternal, gold, untrimmed, shade.
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Mcintosh Avatar
October 13, 2019 at 5:21 AM
I love nature poems... they are always the best ones. Yours is exquisite. Many prayers and blessings for you, Gina
Marcum Wong Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 7:01 PM
So sorry about the word typo that kept this from placing higher Eve. I loved it! Congratulations on your HM. xxoo
Proxenos Avatar
August 30, 2019 at 8:33 AM
Hi Eve, An exquisite write - well done. Kind regards, Jennifer.
Faulkner Avatar
August 29, 2019 at 3:32 PM
This is a feast of nature, Eve, but since you accidently used one the required words incorrectly (procession instead of possession) I placed it lower, but still really love it-
Gondolf Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 8:22 AM
Beautiful imagery, Eve, I enjoyed the read. Best of luck in the contest. John
Pandit Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 7:19 AM
Enjoyed the flow and imagery of your poem Eve..all the best for a win.
Andresen Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 3:32 AM
- The joy of the little things in nature ... take time to enjoy ... beautifully written, Eve :) - Best wishes in the contest :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
Cunningham Avatar
August 9, 2019 at 1:57 AM
A lovely dedication to natures perfection Eve. We only have to look around us to enjoy its beauty. Good luck. Tom
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