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Nature's Perfect Shake

Frosty, white, foaming Rock and branch for stirring sticks Nature’s perfect shake Entry for Raul Moreno's Contest

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Daver Austin

Date: 12/19/2012 2:51:00 PM

Love the image. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 3/29/2010 8:49:00 AM

I can picture a kid playing with melted ice. Stirring it like a shake. P.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

Date: 3/7/2010 12:13:00 PM

Congratulations Shawn, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 3/4/2010 1:51:00 PM

Loved thad middle line and congrats for being in the winners' circle. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

Date: 3/4/2010 10:03:00 AM

A nice Honor mentioned, Shawn. Congratulations, AGape, Moses

Thomas Kurdyla

Date: 3/4/2010 9:55:00 AM

Shawn, Yes! This is wonderful. I truly enjoyed it. Congrats, Tom

Marty Owens

Date: 3/4/2010 7:43:00 AM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

Date: 3/3/2010 9:50:00 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

Date: 3/3/2010 5:26:00 PM

I really like yoiur imaginative Haiku, Shawn. congratulations

Connie Marcum Wong

Date: 3/3/2010 12:34:00 PM

Shawn, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Blessings, Connie

Audrey Haick

Date: 3/3/2010 12:33:00 PM

My congratulations on your win in the contest, Shawn!! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

James Fraser

Date: 3/3/2010 11:35:00 AM

Shawn, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

Date: 3/3/2010 9:01:00 AM

What a delightful Haiku. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 3/3/2010 5:50:00 AM

Congrats Shawn on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy with your beautiful Haiku.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 3/3/2010 3:31:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Shawn. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

Date: 3/3/2010 1:46:00 AM

Shawn, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Susan Palli

Date: 2/28/2010 8:37:00 AM

good one!

Doris Culverhouse

Date: 2/27/2010 6:36:00 PM

I thought you were talking aout the quake.

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 2/27/2010 1:03:00 PM

Delightful haiku, Shawn! Can I have a sip? Nothing could be more satisfying than such a "perfect shake" from nature. Love, Carolyn

Jared Pickett

Date: 2/27/2010 11:37:00 AM

Great job with this haiku my friend.... Nice....:JP]