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Nature's Perfect Shake

Frosty, white, foaming
Rock and branch for stirring sticks
Nature’s perfect shake

Entry for Raul Moreno's Contest

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Daver Austin

December 19, 2012 at 2:51 PM

Love the image. Congrats on the selection. daver

Poet Destroyer A

March 29, 2010 at 8:49 AM

I can picture a kid playing with melted ice. Stirring it like a shake. P.d.

Dane Ann Smith-Johnsen

March 7, 2010 at 12:13 PM

Congratulations Shawn, on your placement in Raul’s “Icy Cascade” haiku contest. I can see why you are in the winners’ circle! Nice! Smiles, Dane Ann

Andrea Dietrich

March 4, 2010 at 1:51 PM

Loved thad middle line and congrats for being in the winners' circle. LUv, Andrea

John Freeman

March 4, 2010 at 10:03 AM

A nice Honor mentioned, Shawn. Congratulations, AGape, Moses

Thomas Kurdyla

March 4, 2010 at 9:55 AM

Shawn, Yes! This is wonderful. I truly enjoyed it. Congrats, Tom

Marty Owens

March 4, 2010 at 7:43 AM

Congratulations on your win...enjoyed...Marty

Caroline Cécile Delacroix

March 3, 2010 at 9:50 PM

So very nice Haiku! Congrats on your win! Best wishes, Caroline.

Robert A. Dufresne

March 3, 2010 at 5:26 PM

I really like yoiur imaginative Haiku, Shawn. congratulations

Connie Marcum Wong

March 3, 2010 at 12:34 PM

Shawn, Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest. Blessings, Connie

Audrey Haick

March 3, 2010 at 12:33 PM

My congratulations on your win in the contest, Shawn!! Enjoy! Peace, Audrey

James Fraser

March 3, 2010 at 11:35 AM

Shawn, many congratulations on your placing in Raul's contest >> James

Joyce Johnson

March 3, 2010 at 9:01 AM

What a delightful Haiku. Congratulations. Joyce

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

March 3, 2010 at 5:50 AM

Congrats Shawn on your HM in Raul's contest.. a wonderful win for u to enjoy with your beautiful Haiku.. luv.. Linda-Marie "Sweetheart" of P.S.

Carol Sunshine Brown

March 3, 2010 at 3:31 AM

Congratulations on your win in Raul's contest Icy Cascade Shawn. Love,Carol

Raul Moreno

March 3, 2010 at 1:46 AM

Shawn, congratulations on your placement in my contest...Raul

Susan Palli

February 28, 2010 at 8:37 AM

good one!

Doris Culverhouse

February 27, 2010 at 6:36 PM

I thought you were talking aout the quake.

Carolyn Devonshire

February 27, 2010 at 1:03 PM

Delightful haiku, Shawn! Can I have a sip? Nothing could be more satisfying than such a "perfect shake" from nature. Love, Carolyn

Jared Pickett

February 27, 2010 at 11:37 AM

Great job with this haiku my friend.... Nice....:JP]

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